Suspense DIY (do it yourself)

Hi Class! We have begun exploring the suspense genre of writing. Here is your first activity:

Write an amazing opening to a suspenseful story using one of the following story starters:

  • It was a strange night, there seemed to be a chill in the air…
  • As soon as he/she arrived, he/she could sense that something was out of place…
  • One night, he/she looked out the window and saw the neighbour…
  • He/She was reading a book when he/she looked up. There in the window he/she saw…
  • He/She decided to go for an evening stroll.  He/She walked about three blocks when he/she felt it…
  • They would have been fine if they hadn’t stopped for the stranger…
  • Everyone avoided the big old mansion. It was believed to have…
  • Something is drastically wrong! Every time he/she picks up the telephone…
  • Sometimes he/she thinks his/her friend has strange powers. Every time he/she is around…
  • All of the sudden he/she was trapped!

Your goal is to lead the reader to a suspenseful point in the story…then STOP! Be descriptive. Use powerful words. Vary your sentence patterns. Remember, suspense does not have to be horrific, sad, or gory!

Your classmates will complete the story to their liking.

The first part of this activity is due by the end of Monday’s computer class (November 25). You will then be responsible to finish at least five other stories by the end of computer class on Wednesday December 4.

Each contribution requires at least 150 words.

 

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132 Responses to Suspense DIY (do it yourself)

  1. sydney says:

    She decided to go for an evening stroll. She walked about three blocks when she felt it… A blasting wind come to the side of her stomach brushing up against her, with cold hands as it disappeared, with her frozen in the shivering winter night. Standing there in hesitation she wanted to move but her body told her something different. Absurd she thought, I am not different am I, she wondered. As her body jolted forward scared of what lay beyond. She walked down 6 streets stopped to stare for nobody coming. As a man running brushed her side as the same coldness her shivering body felt before. Thoughts rushing through her head. Furthermore she turned around walked home, Nothing happened. As she approached her house, very tiny house she thought as the other houses near her were rich, she thought, “ i do not need a huge house I am perfect just the way I am.” As she walks into her house something appeared something that have never been there before did somebody want her dead.

    • Seth says:

      There was a time bomb! She knew she had to dismantle it, so she grabbed a knife and a pair of tweezers and got to work. She got the cover that goes over the wires and used the tweezers to pull the wires. THERE WAS ONLY 1 HOUR LEFT! She knew she had to hurry, but she also knew she wouldn’t make it. As she was pulling wires, she saw something out of the corner of her eye and she got up to see what it was. As she peered through the hallway that leads to her bedroom, she got a quick glimpse of a strange creature that was lurking in her house. She went to the room that the “thing” ran into. When she got in the room the window was open and a black cat was running across the yard. She went back to the time bomb and there was half an hour left. She cut one wire, then two, then three. There was only two left to go. She held it up and just then a bullet shot threw the window and hit the time bomb, sending it fling through the air, hitting the carpet, and causing the wire to hit the carpet and cause a fire. She ran outside and saw a man in the window starring down at her with a black cat in his hands. Fire men soon arrived and the man who shot the gun was caught and taken to jail. The bomb was dismantled and everyone was safe.

    • Kiira says:

      Collapsing to the ground in terror, She soon froze in panic. When she woke up early the next morning her vision was a little hazy but she refused to rest. Up on her feet again she began searching for clues. First she found a picture of her all torn up and posted on her wall, saying I’ll be here again at 10:30pm. The second clue she was able to find was a picture of her family all smashed on the floor. She picked it up and saw that she was missing out of it. Now as she saw blood on her wall, she soon began screaming in horror. As she scrambled for the door she soon found out that it had been jambed. She wasn’t able to find a way out that way! Frantically running for the back door, she came to a stop. She wanted to find a way out but her mind told her other wise. She steered her body around and looked at the clock. She had woken up at 9:00am and it was now 10:00pm! Her heart was racing. She didn’t know what to do. She didn’t know how to get out. She was stuck with no way out!

  2. matthew says:

    All of a sudden he was trapped! Charlie woke up startled to see a slightly tan lady standing over him while examining him. He felt a shot of pain run though him and as he looked down Charlie saw that the tan lady and her partner had tied him up onto a table . As he looked at the two people in front of him he noticed that… they had other people that were tied up wit him although it looked like he was the only person that seemed to be moving. This made him worried so he started struggling to get out of the elasticity ropes around his feet, hands , neck, and waist. The tan lady started to approach him, She explained that it was no use the ropes are strong enough to hold down a rhino. A panic attacked his body. He could feel the sweat start to drizzle down his forehead, As that happened the tan lady and her partner started to walk over with a whopping 2 foot needle, he needed to get out, With all the pressure Charlie passed out.

    • gurisha says:

      Matthew E or Matthew S??

    • Trey says:

      Again, he startled awake, eyes wide. There was a different lady…. or? Yes , this was a different room the lady turned to him and, when she saw that he was awake an astonished look came across her face, “Y-you’re alive!!… how?” she exclaimed. “Ya… who are you? Where am I?”, “An insane asylum.” she replied smugly. Charlie’s eyes went so wide they almost popped out. “ That needle should have put you to sleep forever…… unless?”, she tempted. “ Unless WHAT?!!!” he hollered at the top of his lungs, she went on her phone, “Yup,they you to me.”, “To do what?” he asked, curious now. “ Well”, she said, “to kill you, its about time I’ve had some fun….. I think I’ll soften you up first.” Charlie was about to speak but the lady gagged him before he could. She took him to two connected rooms, the one they want into had a enormous pressure table and she took his gag off and shoved him in and started pushing it down with incredible force. The first sickening cracks came CRACK C-C-CRACK all his ribs except one then that one went too. He couldn’t scream the pressure had pushed the air out of him. Then it was gone. She lifted his shattered body and took him to the other room to find 10-15 dead bodies then she stabbed him through his heart and he died.

      • Brendan says:

        When Charlie awoke it was pich black. He was in a box! And this time tied up not strapped down but he felt different, Stronger almost and his heart. It almost felt like his heart.. had stopped or he had died. He felt like he HAD to get out or he might die again. He Felt around the box to find any flaws in the box and sure enough there was! He could see a crack though the box! He seemed to be on a truck with alot of other boxes. They were some were that stank A lot. It smelt like rotting flesh? When they dumped of his box he kicked the one side of and it proved to be quite easy. He was in a dump of some sort. Now it really smelt of dead. A guy saw him and said, “Hey how’d you get in here!” screamed The raged gard, “I came out of that box, what happened whats going on!?” Studered Charlie. , “Y, Your ..alive?!” , “I’m supposed to be dead!”. After that the guard turned around and walked away so he took that as a sign to run. he ran and ran until he found the nearest town. Then he got a train ride home and forgot about every thing. BUT did the people that kidnapped him!

    • Beau says:

      When Charlie woke up he nervously looked around. All of a sudden
      he felt a slap on his shoulder. The tan lady unhooked the ropes
      and led him into another room. Suddenly Charlie shoved the lady
      out of his way and ran down the stairs. Charlie not paying attention
      crashed into the table then he got up and ran out of the house.
      The lady screamed, ” get back here!” As Charlie was running
      he tripped. Charlie was brought back to the house and tied
      back onto the table. Charlie noticed that the lady and her partner
      left the room. He was able to reach into his pocket and pull out
      a pocket knife. He could hear the ladies coming. Charlies
      heart was pounding. He could hear the foot steps getting closer
      and he needed to cut one more rope. Finally, he was free.
      Charlie climbed out of the open window never to be seen again.

    • Garet says:

      As Charlie woke up he realized no one was there he was only asleep on a log. Charlie was floating around he also noticed that he could not move, in the distance he saw a saw. A rotating saw he was heading right toward the blade, guessing by how everything was going he would be head first into the sharp device. As he approached the wood mill Charlie was wondering why he would end up in a situation like this, a couple seconds “drifted by” he was centimetres away from certain demise. He blinked and discovered he wasn’t there anymore instead he had a giant two foot needle going out of his very flesh he was in no pain at all. Charlie asked why he couldn’t feel that it turns out he was put on a drug that was so he wouldn’t freak out, he was always afraid of the flu shot.

    • Sam says:

      Charlie woke with a start, blood coursed through his body making him feel like a red hot iron. He started to examine the room, it was almost impossible to see with the amount of fluid he had been filled with. Everything was a mixture of different colours, realizing he was still drugged he had nothing to do but fall asleep. When Charlie woke up, he saw everything in the room now that the drugs had receded. He noticed the deep cracks in the room with moss and moisture everywhere with signs of erosion in the deeply creased stone. Charlie saw that he was in a cellar, he got up the room seemed strangely medieval. As he got up he wondered where am I? His question soon was answer when he found the cellar door open with a small plate of food with bread and cheese. He paced up the iron stairs he found the exit and he found a latched steel door. Charlie unlocked the door and paced outside… He found himself in New York, Times square! Even though he had found the place of his dreams he would never drop the question of how he got there.

      The End.

      (202 Words)

    • Mariah L says:

      When Charlie awoke he noticed that he wasn’t in the same place he was in a alley still tied to the chair. Charlie was freaked out as to why they wanted him dead. He struggled to get out but it was no use. Charlie was having a panic attack! He noticed that someone was slowly walking to wards him but their phone rang and walked the other way. He tried to scream at them but he couldn’t it hurt him way too much he couldn’t even speak! The tan lady was carrying a large box while walking to wards him. Anger filled his mind as she approached him. She did not speak she just stood the and put the box on the ground then lowered herself near the box then pulled a string then ran. Charlie was panicked once again but he knew that a bomb was in the box it was obvious. Why wouldn’t she be carrying a box? Charlie thought, and in that sudden moment there was a extremely huge bang. The bomb. Charlie flew up against the wall and the force was indescribable. The chair flew straight onto the ground and hit a dumpster, He was face up and all he could see was the two buildings going straight into one another. The impact against him was harsh and extremely painful! It was over.

  3. Matther E says:

    The Death Of George Daniel Saint Clair

    So it was a rainy night, the leafs of the moist birch tree where being crunched each time some one stepped on them.
    There was a particular lady that was walking to the store to go get some eggs and milk so she was going to the store and she noticed a man he was a very long skinny man with a top hat and a long beard
    That had a German Accent that man spoke very softly and he did not speak a lot and the only time he really spoke was when he was either with family or when he was alone.
    Back to that lady her name was Christina Becky and when she saw that man he walked right past her and he accidentally bumped in to her and she dropped her stuff and the man said “I am sorry”
    so he helped her get her stuff and he noticed a book that book was his favourite book it was also Christina Favourite book.
    The women said “May i ask your name?” and the man said “ My name is George Daniel Saint Clair”.
    So Christina asked for his number and he gave it to her.
    Mean while Christina Totally forgot about going to the store when she returned home she called that number to discuss the book.
    Christina called the number and it said “This phone number no longer exists”
    She said “Maybe he gave me the wrong number”.
    So she looked him up on the Internet and it said “George Daniel Saint Clair Died in 1967 in a mining accident.
    Christina Stood with Frozen eyes and a thumping headache she passed out on the floor and when she woke up her neighbour found her laying Where the man was originally talking to her.

    • Seth says:

      When Christina was fully awake she got up and went home. When she got home she heard some sounds coming from the backyard so she decided to investigate. Christina got to the back door she heard another sound that sounded like glass shattering. She ran outside and grabbed a shovel and slowly walked into the house and heard some banging that sounded like it was coming from the kitchen. Christina heard lots of loud banging and then the loudest one yet and it stopped. The only thing she could hear was silence. As she stepped in to the kitchen she looked in all the cupboards and looked on all the shelves, but then she realized that the fridge was out of place so she tried to push it back into place, but there was something blocking the way so she peaked around the corner and the guy that she
      saw at the store was crouched down behind the fridge. Christina ran to her neighbour’s house and told them that something was wrong at her house and she needed to phone the police. Christina phoned the police and they soon arrived and Christina told them everything that has been happening and what he looked like. After that nothing has happened again.

      • Sam says:

        Christina never imagined that a robber would break into her house but had never gotten enough sleep the following week.
        She felt insecure, unsafe and a bit shaken. If anything she needed a sense of security! She decided to take a walk usually it would calm her down and let Christina figure things out. She crossed 5th street, and saw a shadow jump into someones lawn but she ignored it. She absolutely didn’t want to have another incident in only two weeks! But as a news reporter she had instinct for story finding. Christina walked into the yard and saw an open window she slunk through it an saw inside. Broken glass surrounded the room, expensive pottery was smashed and combined with many eloquent shards. A combination of glass, and shards, actually looked pretty to her, and gave her a good feeling. She stepped carefully through the shards, if she stepped on one she would alert the robber! She was loosing her balance! She was so close to the end but she tripped! Christina didn’t fall but stepped on a shard of glass, she made piercing sound and heard movement upstairs! She saw a phone, and tiptoed over and picked up the receiver. Pushed ”9” ”1” and then a hand covered her mouth! It was to late! She pressed one, but she dropped it! Although the receiver had dropped it was still on, and recorded their quarrel! Christina was now being chased, and couldn’t find a way out! The masked man now drew a bloody knife, and was about to strike… A big-muscled police man grabbed him, dragged him down the stairs, and threw him into the police car!

        The End

    • Brendan R. says:

      She was feeling dizzy so she decided to not go shopping. Instead she went to her sister Roses place downtown. Rose was very inviting but when she told her what happened she thought she was crazy! Christina was determined to make her believe her! She got really frustrated so she tired to calm down and sleep on it. When she woke up she was a little shaky. So she wanted her self hat he was just a ghost. She went to ancestry.ca and it was true, he was dead. She was really scared but felt a bit better. That morning her sister asked if she was felling better and she reashered her she was totally fine though she was not. She went on with her life and forgot about her experience but the man was still waching her.

  4. gurisha says:

    The Mysterious Mansion

    Everyone avoided the big old mansion. It was believed in 1895 to have housed a 4 member family. After a drastic homicide in 1900 strange,eerie things have happened, such as people going in and never coming out.. As reported, survivors have shakily spoken about get a glimpse of a little figure standing in a little girls rooms doorway in the corner of their eyes. Rarely people have driven by and reported catching sight a ghastly womens figure standing in the gates of the mansion. Severely injured people have claimed to have being trapped in the mansion, lights flickering and a little girl following them around..Also in 1955 this horrific mansion was going to be destroyed until 4 ghostly figures were reported to have dragged in the workers and no of them have returned since. Scientists have tried to find out what is causing these horrific events..will we ever know?

    • sydney says:

      What the shadows mean plus the little girl. What is going on I am getting to the bottom of this mystery. The night that was told to be horrifying was December the 21. Shocked with fear as jitters run down my body. As I run down the street I look both ways before I enter the gate. I see the shadow in the gate as I walk backwards terrified with what lay beyond. I walk beyond as I come to the door the ruckus is horrific. The ruckus may be the sound of the 4 family members. The door creeks open with dust and cobwebs. My head overwhelmed with thoughts at this moment. I looked through the house to find a slight glow in the distance, as I creep closer. The glow is not a person it is a projector! There is a black curtain hanging. As I unravel the curtain toes head body. Somebody has been working all the projectors I have uncovered the mystery. As the house was removed I am a neighbour hood hero.

      • serena says:

        They were all seeing the little girl the next morning people were getting anxious to find out what happened. But soon the same little girl appeared. As soon as one person looked she was gone. Soon people started to go home to look on the news to see what happened. They were shocked to hear that a boy went in there last night, nobody saw it happen all they showed was his picture. They all turned the TV off to wait for further news. The next morning there were strange sounds coming out of the house, there was screaming and shouting but not just from one person from several. Nobody thought that anybody would go in to find out what the noise was. Buy they were wrong, a small child walked up the stairs cautiously as she opened the door the small girl came out she held out a hand. She was terrified but she took her chances and took her hand, the small girl led her into the house and then the door closed. The crowd gasped in fear. They waited for two hours and then the girl appeared again but not alone she had everyone who disappeared with her. Then a small ghostly figure came out, then she vanished into thin air. After that nobody ever disappeared again and the story lived on with the town until a tourist came and went into the house.

    • Sarah says:

      People thought that people were playing pranks when they discovered that there was no one around the house when all these people disappeared. People decided that if they saw anyone gong to the house or in the house they would be charged. When no one went in to the house, people that walked by the house would get hurt and have to go to the hospital. That’s when they decided that the house was haunted. Everybody avoided the house even more than they did before. Now the house kept making noises like grumbling noises. So one day a reporter went to see the house with all the cameras and started to see if anything would happen. Nothing happened. So they went inside the house, the lights started to flicker. They started to talk to the cameras when they lost connection. They thought it was just a glitch like the lights. But then the lights went completely out. They decided to go outside when the door was locked. The next day no one heard of them ever again.

      • serena says:

        People started to wonder about what had happened to them or if they would ever see them again. But what they least expected was about to happen. One day a mom and a little girl were on their usual walk and when they came to the house they say someone standing in the doorway. They thought it was just a figure of their imagination but when they took a closer look they found out that it was a real person. They figured that it was another reporter but when they got a closer look it was one of the camera men that had disappeared. When pother people started walking by they all started calling and texting people and soon news reporters where there. When they went up to see if he was ok he mad a deafening shrieking sound. Everybody was terrified they didn’t know what would happen to them and then out of no where came the rest of the missing people safe at last.

    • tj says:

      In 2001 scientists figured out what was causing these horrific events .It is believe to be a little girl with a teddy bear with bloody finger prints on it. The scientists think that every person she kills she puts there finger in some blood and wipes in on the teddy bear. In 2012 the ghost hunters went into the house to see if they could find any more information on these events and they didn’t come out . The news reporters thought the ghost hunters went back to Texas, but they didn’t. The little girl had parked their work van behind the mansions were it wasn’t discovered until 2013 when they had scheduled and destruction for the mansion because of the haunted activity inside the house. When the destroyers came they found the van, and noticed the little girl was sitting in the window sill in one of the rooms in the house. At lunch break the construction workers were talking about seeing her and decided to leave the house as and not bulldoze it. That night one of the workers went to bed and he woke up with the little girl standing over him.

      • sydney says:

        The girl making flashes in other workers dream was not a mistake. Her mind filled with thoughts to destroy horrified everyone. The workers went back the next day to find there tools covered in blood and the teddy bear sitting next to it. This little girl was out for revenge. Making there way back to the van slowly, They bumped into something it was not the van the little girl blocked them. The little girl had never been caught on camera. The first man pulled out his phone. In the distance the teddy bear was levitating coming closer the teddy bear cut through the man like a ghost, Smash the man feel to the ground. The raspy voice of the girl was scratchy on the mens ears. Some of the men hoped in the van left the little girl alone and the rest of the men dragged the man laying on the ground toward the van. The little girl said to herself, I will get them. The men got back to the construction site ran to the computer and locked all the doors. The men searched and found the little girl is not scary it just seems she is, What in your imagination that is what judges how scary it is. The men went at the crack of dawn the next day with no fear in mind. They bulldozed the house and left no remains. The little girl never to be heard of again.

  5. KoBeBSH123 says:

    All of a sudden Micheal was trapped. in the traffic when Micheal had to be at work by 10:00 and it’s 8:00. And it takes 3 hours to get to his work so instead of driving he got out of his car and he starts to run to his work. He makes it half way there ant it’s 9:30 he stops to go to the bathroom he gets out then he looks at his. Watch it was 9:45 he started running again then it happened.

    • Gabrielle B. :) says:

      It was when he was crossing the road. It was tragic. Micheal got hit by a car! The person who was driving the car had drove through a red light and obviously didn’t see Micheal. People working in there little shops on the sides of the streets were coming out. 911 had been dialed. The ambulance had arrived and a firetruck to clean up the horrible mess. The paramedics said, “He may live, it is very unlikely though. They called the police because the guy who had hit Micheal had been drinking and driving last night, speeding about 30km over the speed limit, and he went through a red light. Did Micheal die or live?

      • Sam says:

        Micheal woke and saw his body covered with rain, blood was coursing though his brain and trauma whelped through his body.
        He was so tense he could hardly move, and he decided the best thing to do is breathe, let all the feelings leave his body. His eyes opened slowly and woke up in hospital. With his heartbeat being monitored and blood and oxygen bags were hung from hangars.
        He tried to sit up but every muscle in his body ached he had no choice. To wait see the world go bye before his eyes. He felt so worthless! He wished to see the sun and longed to have the ever so sweet sunshine beam on his face. 2 years later… Micheal was standing out in the sunlight and had recovered from a terrible car accident. He decided to go into military training and pay back his country for the wonders they had gave him. A couple years later was in the best-in-class division and felt great. Micheal was on a helicopter for covert military training, all of a sudden his helicopter was crashing, and monsters were killing his men! He desperately grabbed onto the pad and was hanging at least a hundred feet in the air! The helicopter was dropping fast he jumped… Micheal hit the ground and got up immediately and was greeted by a Man named Jacob, and Jessie. He drove with them into the distance.

        (cliffhanger toward my book)

        To be continued…. .

      • Larissa says:

        Cute story Gabby, how does it end?
        Love mom

    • Madison says:

      He was trapped in a green sticky goo,then something grabbed him from behind , he turned and saw a disgusting creature.It spoke in a terrifying voice,”Time to die for your misdeed oh please, oh please, plead.”Then Micheal did what the creature said Micheal spoke in a trembling voice,”O…..oh p..p..please oh great one no”. The creature spoke once again and said,”Do you know your misdeed of course you couldn’t you were three.”Micheal stared in the creature’s red eyes and saw what he did,his to sister try to summon a demon throw there blood but then he save them from the creature that stands before him.Then the vision stop and the demon spoke in anger,”Know,know you see your misdeed against me.”The creature grab the Micheal from the goo and open his gapping jaw and shoved him done,but when Micheal opened his eyes he was surrounded bye more people in a gooey place he was in side of the creature.The creature spoke,”You see,you see you are inside me for eternity to die pain fully.Micheal cried and said sobbing,”All right great one i shall remain for eternity and die pain fully.

    • aliya says:

      The world was coming to a end! He saw creatures come toward him, what did they want? Micheal ran away but not fast enough, they shot him down with a tranquilizer and he fell on the cold hard ground and shut his eyes! He woke up the next morning and found that they were testing all kind of mysteries drugs on him, but he was not the only one. it was as if they got every one they could find in to hook them up to cords and wires. Micheal tried to fight for his freedom but it was no use! it was impossible! these alien where obviously very smart. then suddenly his skin started turning green, slimy, and he was turning into one of them! He had to rip the cords and wires off him and get out of there but how? Micheal started to turn even more what was going to happen! Was this the end of his human days?

    • sydney says:

      He got into a helicopter escorted by the police. He thought they were taking him to work but he landed in the police station. In the cold place a dome around him as he stands and waits and waits. Coldness and darkness over take him. His heart beating a mile a minute. Micheal started to take a deep breath, Collapsing to the floor. The guard rushed to his side. ” We need him for our plan the guard whispered.” The sun rose in the broad daylight, Micheal stretching out waking slowly to find medal and silver attached to his body. Micheal trying to move afraid of opening his eyes. He was in a tight space getting claustrophobic. Micheal calmed down taking a deep breath. The capsule jerked as Micheal say the florescent light shining above him. He calmly sat up. Diligently the man worked on the computer not even noticing him. There was a white board sitting in from of Micheal very well handwritten, As her tried to make out the words. He read them jerkily. ” Repeat this after me,” ,” I am Micheal I am 37 years old I live in Florida I am in a prison I am safe..” The words make sense but why. A elderly man in all black came and sat down in the rigidly squeaky chair. We meet eyes. Slowly reciting the words in my head made me calm down. As the man spoke I listened carefully. We are using you for a project but there are ways you can get out. A dusty book lay upon my lap. As I was looking through the book a word caught my eye. There is a way but I will have to make 100,000 dollars. As I make a quick call the line goes dead. About an hour passed and I saw a silhouette at the door. My girlfriend with crisp $100 dollar bills in her hand. As I get dressed out of the grey damp clothes we drive home in silence. Knowing I am safe again is all my life depends on.

    • tj olaney says:

      Micheal was sprinting down the street until he saw a bunch of protesters for the fracking business. Micheal had to turn around and go all the way around the block, but when he got there, the town had construction right in front of his work building so Micheal had to walk around to building to get in his work. When Micheal got to the back door it was being blocked by a huge order of work clothing. Once Micheal moved the huge order of work cloths he figured out that the door was locked. Micheal rang the door bell and nobody came to the door so Micheal hit the door with frustration and the security alarm went off and then the phone rang. Nobody was there to answer the security phone call so they sent the police to see what was going on at Micheals work. The police came and said,”Sir you are not suppost to be here”and Micheal said,”This is my work and I am late for a provincial meeting and if
      I am not there then I could be fired!”

  6. Sarah says:

    The Dark Forest

    It was a strange night, there seemed to be chill in the air, when all was silent, nothing to be heard. Alison walked her dog Scruffy though the forest. She didn’t usually walk him there but she decided to make a change. Alison was afraid of the dark, so she left early but it got dark faster than usual. She got scared, she started to bolt her way home when she collided with a tree trunk. All went silent until a shriek of noise echoed through the open forest. Scruffy started to bark fiercely. Alison saw movement and it wasn’t Scruffy. Then it disappeared, She thought it was her imagination, when all of a sudden it wasn’t quiet anymore. The wind started blasting against the trees, branches smacking against each other. Alison closed her eyes, while Scruffy was yapping away, and looking around nervously. When Scruffy started to bark even more. Then there came a black image through the dark forest.

    • Brendan says:

      The image seemed to levitate more than anything.It grew closer and closer! Then just as it was only a few feet away, it vanished! She was stunned. When Alison actually got up and started to move the forest was still soundless. As she started to sprint she heard a scream that pierced her ears, it was like having pencils being stabbed into her ears. She could not move and almost paced out by the horrifying sound. Again she saw the dark figure it hovered over to her. slowly and eerily lifted it arm and pointed to her.., “GET OUT!!” It quickly shouted with its demon voice.Alison shot up and BOLTED home! As soon as she got home she hid under the blankets of her bed, “Could that really be!” she she whispered, “could the legends be TRUE!” her heart was still pounding in her chess from the terrifying experience, “Wa.. was that a BANSHEE!” Then all of a sudden, the most terrifying thought came to her. WHERE WAS SRUFFY!

    • Beau says:

      The blur growled. Scruffy was barking furiosly.
      The blur came into veiw. It was a Grizzly bear.
      Scruffy backed up. The Grizzly bears fur was long and
      wrinkly. It’s teeth were white with blood on them.
      Alison crawled backwards. She was scared and frightened.
      The bear ran towards her. Suddenly a pack of coyotes came.
      There was about a dozen of them. One coyote bit the bears neck.
      The others bit the bears stomach and legs. Alison ran to
      a nearby tree. She wraped her arms around the trunk of
      tree, and grabbed a branch and climed up. She grabbed Scruffy.
      They waited until the coyotes were gone. The coyotes had
      killed the bear. When the coyotes left, Alison and Scruffy
      climbed down. Alison finally started to calm down and they went home.

    • Gurisha says:

      She was engulfed in the darkness,Scruffy’s barks were getting quieter and quieter. She became light headed and passed out. Alison woke up confused a few hours after..She was trapped in an under ground jungle?! She threw her head up noticing there was nothing but sheer darkness. She walked around in terror. Will she ever find Scruffy? Will she ever return home? She made a questionable decision…She ran and ran for30 minuted straight and noticed sounds coming from behind a tree… she climbed behind the tree cautiously,and discovered a beautiful waterfall!Alison was dying of thirst so she excitedly ran towards the waterfall, cupping water in her hands and throwing down her throat . She hadn’t been so relieved in her life. She peered through the waterfall and started noticing a small dark figure she jumped through the waterfall. Only to find Scruffy and discovering a table full of food! She went to go pick up scruffy until….

    • serena says:

      When she saw it she closed her eyes hoping that it was just a dream, when she opened her eyes she knew that it was all real. She was terrified with panic she started running but she didn’t know where it was so she could have been running strait into it she had no idea. Before she knew it she was knocked out. When she woke up she found herself in a cave but she wasn’t cold she was actually quite warm. When she looked around she found a creature so strange to her but not scary at all. As she was about to say something the creature turned around and it was crying she went and sat beside it and it stopped. She figured that it was lonely so she stayed with it all night. The next morning she called the police for someone to pick her up and the creature. When they got there though they looked at her like she was insane. They told her they have to kill the creature and she didn’t want that to happen, she stood up for it but when she did that they killed the creature an her. After that nobody ever went near that forest again.

    • Sam says:

      A shadowy figure darted from side to side as she backed up against a tree! What could it be as she thought to herself. Could this be the figure who was following her for the most of her life? She started to run. Scruffy ran behind her and she found a page a yellow piece of torn paper saying: HE IS COMING FOR YOU.
      Her heart started to race to a unstoppable speed. She was in a dark forest now and she drew her flashlight. She eventually got lost finding several pages. Maybe this is a clue toward that figure she thought. Then when she grew tired she counted the pages. There were 8 pages in all and when she looked up she saw it… It had a completely white face and was super tall. It had a expensive black suit covered with blood. He reached for her and she screamed….

      To be continued….

    • Trey says:

      Alyson screamed at the top of her lungs, a high pitched, chilling scream. ” It’s so like girls to scream.” it said just before it leaped. The stranger only grazed her wrist. She ran home and tried to sleep but couldn’t so she went downstairs and made herself some coffee. Bang, bang, bang the deafening sound came from upstairs, in her parents room!!!! Alyson raced upstairs to see what was happening. When she got there the window was open and there was the man from the forest. Alyson yelled a battle cry. The man looked and jumped out the window. Alyson examined her parents but they only had the exact scratches she had on her wrist. Alyson had nightmares the next night, she woke up having wet the bed and was drenched in cold sweat. She walked into her parents room to check on them only to find they were dead. She went to school and asked her friend if she could stay over night. Alyson’s friend asked why and Alyson had no choice but to tell her the whole truth.. The next morning Alyson’s friend woke up to find Alyson dead.

  7. Garet says:

    As soon as he arrived, he could sense that something was out of place. There was no cheese sauce at the local corner store! He, being Macho Nacho Man or MNM. was going to get cheese sauce to refuel his atomic cheese cruiser, he was going to stop the world from being destroyed from mutant rats and radioactive cheese puffs but there were more important things to do. Just then he sensed something “cheesy” he decided to go to the local radioactive nuclear power plant, although it was only three gangsters and a weird guy planning a heist nothing abnormal there. Next he chose to go back to his headquarters in the chip aisle at the store then he thought about at the gas station. There he saw a maniacal villain pumping gasoline into a can, quickly MNM reacted to the maniac’s evilness. He swiftly pulled out his trusty fly swatter and swatted a fly that fly had a atomic bomb. The atomic bomb flew at the guy faster than a bullet and carried the guy to jail the police shortly arrived to award MNM. He was so happy, although at the corner of his eye he saw a guy lighting his cigar with a barbecue lighter MNM swatted it out of his hand mission. Accomplished except it slowly fell ignited some, spilled cheese sauce. “Thats where it went!” MNM announced. Although little did he know cheese sauce was highly flammable.

    • Garet says:

      By the way this is the Adventures Of Macho Nacho Man Story one: cheese man fight crime

    • Garet says:

      As the cheese sauce lit on fire Macho Nacho Man without hesitation speedily got into the atomic cheese cruiser he raced to the indestructible grocery store. He knew he had to go back into time to stop this that meant he would need his jet, to get his jet MNM would need more cheese sauce, then he realized he wasn’t moving. The cheese cruiser melted “uh oh” said the super cheese guy. Without that he would need to walk there that was a whole 5meter walk he would not be able to make it. Good thing he was master ballerina math class MNM slowly walked toward his destination, after a gruesome 5meter walk he was there, where was his jet? Then he remembered his atomic cheese cruiser was his jet it was a two in one deal silly cheese. Turns out he had full coverage so he called the insurance thing and in a couple weeks he got a brand new Atomic Cheese Cruiser [ACC] “wow!” MNM said “It even has a built in self destruct button.” he quickly pushed it the new ACC exploded “cooooooool with a k” It formed back together “ unbelievable”. He got in and pushed the save the world button the “cheesy” device turned into a jet. He flew the advanced ACC now AACC he pushed warp speed button the cheesy voice said warp speed activate. Time flew by in reverse he jumped out and dived into the store, As soon as he arrived he could sense something was out of place. There was no cheese sauce at the local corner store!

  8. Trey says:

    Trey

    They would have been fine if they hadn’t stopped for the stranger, he was a scary
    scraggly old
    man, he had wild almost furious eyes and he carried several blood covered knives. He probably used
    them to hunt for food, Jeremy thought trying to comfort himself. “ Hullo, can you help me?”, the man
    asked in a horse cracking voice. Jeremy’s group was frozen so Jeremy asked, “Why? What o you need?” “Food, water and transport.” the man said like it was off the top of his head. Jeremy was a bit tedious about letting the man travel with him but did in the end. That day alone they hiked 50 miles so they were all extremely tired all except the stranger he still had a lot of energy so he took the first watch. The next morning they found two of their group members dead the other two that were supposed to have taken watch that night. One had slashes through him that looked like bear scratches and he had a massive head injury. Jeremy didn’t want to see the second body but he looked anyways. The second body was half hidden and decapitated his head was a few feet away. Thats when Jeremy knew no animal could have done this……..

    • Brendan says:

      As Jeremy and his friends settled down that night, they were all wary of the man. In the middle of the night Jeremy went on his phone sadly to see on that there was no cell service .As he was putting his phone away he heard the sound of foot steps and leaves and sticks crunching. His heart instantly started racing in fear of death! Jeremy looked over to his right only to see a figure crouching down low holding something that looked like a knife. He could only guess it was the stranger on the prowl again. He saw the midnight moon light reflect of of the knife. Jeremy had absolutely NO idea what to do so.. he got out of his tent and as the stranger was about to strike he leaped onto him!It was enough to knock the knife out of the fellows hand and push him over. when he lifted his head up and looked at the man he was on the ground and not moving. He guessed that he had landed on his own knife. The friends left from there wretched trip and forgot all about it.

    • Sarah says:

      When Jeremy looked at the stranger he was wondering if him and his friends should bolt it and leave the stranger behind, but then the stranger asked, “Are we leaving?” Jeremy paused and thought before he was going to answer but one of his friends said to the stranger, “Yes, right away.” After they agreed to start walking the stranger wanted to take a break. For some reason Jeremy was wondering why is he so tired didn’t he get any sleep? Jeremy suggested that he sleep but the stranger said, “No I’m fine now. Let’s go.” So they walked until it was dark, that’s when they decided that Jeremy would take watch by himself. Jeremy didn’t like this ide but he went with it. When it was morning one of the friends disappeared and no one knew where he was. The stranger suggested that they went on without him but they wait about one hour when they decided to head on. Jeremy saw that the stranger only had two knives left and then Jeremy realized that on was for himself and one was for his friend.

    • Alexa says:

      He knew that most animals would have eaten the left over bodies leaving nothing behind. He examined the poor people, Jeremy saw that the cuts were clean and thin but deep. Suddenly a hand touched his back. Jeremy froze in terror and bite his tongue. He turned and saw the sloppy man crotched beside him. Jeremy looked at his fingers and they were stained red, the first thing that came to his mind was that the filthy man murderer the two people who lade lifeless on the ground. Jeremy tumbled over on to the ground in panic. He shouted at the man, “ Did you kill those people!” The man softly spoke, “No I did not but my master did.” Jeremy was surprised to hear that. He had no idea who would have killed such nice people. “ So who killed them! “ Insisted Jeremy. The strange man hesitated then blurted……

    • Seth says:

      Jeremy couldn’t find the stranger, so he ran. He ran about 20 meters when the stranger jumped at him with a hatchet. The stranger swung it at him a couple times, but Jeremy dodged them all. As he kept on running, the stranger was catching up. Jeremy finally turned around and said, “Just kill me if your going to, your too strong for me.” “I don’t want to kill you,” said the stranger, “It’s a joke…well kind of.” , “ When you picked me up…I needed help with living. I was part of a motorcycle gang and I accidentally crashed into another rider. Ever since that, they’ve wanted me dead. They knew I was here so they assassinated the others. The hatchet that I was carrying was just a fake plastic one that you can buy from the dollar store.” Jeremy was so mad that he jumped at the guy and beat him with the plastic hatchet. The stranger ran away and Jeremy told the motorcycle gang where he went. Jeremy never saw the stranger again. He also never picked up a stranger again.

    • Sam says:

      Jeremy knew that it had been the man. Even though he had the stereotypical mind he shouldn’t have trusted the man. He searched through the bright jungle foliage and saw bananas hanging from its tree, he was starving and began to pick… When he finished he was at a beach covered with sparkling golden sand.
      If only his friends where here to see the beautiful sight. But it reminded him that he was completely off task. He crafted a weapon with a strong stick, a plant rope and a jagged rock. Jeremy felt like a barbarian holding his makeshift spear but nonetheless he was out for sweet revenge. He trudged through the beach longing to dip into the water but for his friends he would kill his enemy. Jeremy charged out of anger, he would kill the monster that killed his friends. But would that make him equally a tyrant?

      To be continued….

    • Aliya says:

      they had to continue because they were in the middle of now wheretThey continued on a short while till all of a sudden they saw something move in the trees they all stared at each other in shock.But they were missing the stranger, all of a sudden one of the members peered a little harder and yelled WOLF! They all started screaming and yelling, every one was running for there life. The wolf leaped out of the woods and pounced on one of the members.All the other members glared at the body and started crying while running. The second the wolf was done with the body he went after another member and pummelled him down. A driver driving throw saw what was going on and yelled “get in the back, get in the back!” So they all jumped in the back of his truck unknowing who he was.All of a sudden…

  9. #Mariah says:

    Something is drastically wrong! Every time Kellin Quinn picks up the telephone he hears a deep strong breathing on the other line Kellin attempts but cannot identify the breathing. He decides to take his mind off it but can’t. He decides to go for a stroll and brings his daughter Copeland and they go to the neighbourhood park. While Copeland was on the slide Kellin saw a huge flash and ran over to her (because he was sitting on the near by bench watching her) and she was laying on the ground and perhaps sleeping. Kellin sat her up splashing a small amount off water on her face she awoke but with dark intense red eyes she sighed but her sigh was deep!
    “Copeland?” Kellin spoke with a very worrying voice. There happed to not be an answer instead her eyes went back to their normal self she looked over at Kellin with a smug look. He new right then and there something a actually wrong her grabbed her hand and walked home and sat her on the couch and looked at her eyes he went into the bathroom to get the thermometer. As Kellin fast walked into the living room he then realized Copeland was no where to be found. He checked the whole house but he still could not find her! The phone rang roughly five times when he decides to pick it up there was a strong breathing like earlier just as the person on the other line was about to speak when BAM!

    • Asia says:

      Kellin slowly turned around and saw some sort of animal, or monster even, right behind him! His eyes widened as his jaw dropped and he ran for his life. But there was one problem, all the doors were locked and for some reason he couldn’t unlock them no matter how hard he tried! But Kellin wasn’t the type of person to give up that easily, he kept trying, he even tried to kick the door over but it was no use. Just then he heard the mysterious breathing sounds like he did on the phone and it was coming closer and closer, the breathing getting heavier and heavier. “I have to hide!” thought Kellin over and over again until he found the closest place which was in the closet. “Almost every time in movies it’s always the closet.. Why did I choose this place? It’s so predictable..” said Kellin silently so the monster couldn’t hear him. He decided to peek out of closest just a little bit so he could see if the monster was there, and what it looked it. As soon as he peeked out he saw it, but it wasn’t just a regular monster, its Copeland! Except she wasn’t the same old Copeland, she was giant, deformed, she didn’t even look like herself anymore! She was transformed into a monster, then suddenly Kellin fell out of his hiding spot because he was in shock of what he had just seen. Copeland saw him and stomped toward him, breathing heavily. But as soon as she saw his face she recognized him and shrunk back to her normal size and looked normal again. Once that happened she was crying and screaming like a normal baby or toddler would do. Kellin went over to her and snuggled her into his arms to calm her down, he was so glad everything was back to normal again.

  10. Alexa says:

    An Evening Stroll

    Zoey decided to go for an evening stroll. She walked about three blocks when she felt it. It was all just a blur, Zoey could not focus on what just brushed her elbow. She spun in a circle to try to just get a glimpse of the beast, but when nothing was in sight but a few lonely leafs drifted in the wind. Zoey thought it was nothing before a series of moans and growls echoed from the near by sewage vent. In shock she could not consider what to do next she bolted and did not look back. When Zoey was comfortable with her surroundings she turned to check if the demon was near. Suddenly Zoey stumbled and belly flopped to the stone concrete. She jerked to find the devil peering over her. He flashed his teeth with a evil grin and through his fury,sharp clawed hands toward her and…..

    • matthew says:

      The monster reached out only to help zoey up and to zoeys surprise the monster was a man that was cursed and he was only looking for someone to help him get revenge at the witch that turned him into the horrid monster he is. Zoey accepts the journey and zoey and the monster set off to get revenge on the witch. While they are on there journey zoey sees that the monster at night her always leaves at night and comes back in the mourning, zoey is curious see she fakes going to sleep and she follows him. To her shock she sees that the monster has been ling to her and he has a big group that are feasting on human flesh. While she was hiding she saw that a little girl was walking up to the monster and the children that were monsters attacked her with in a flash the little girl was changed from a little girl to a werewolf. Zoey was so shocked she yelled and the monsters chased her though the forest when…

    • Brendan R. says:

      And burst out in uncontrollable laughter, “HAHAHAHAHAHA, ahhh.oh I sure got you. So my names chuck.” “What?!?” Zoey replied confusingly. “I said my name is Chuck and I pranked you. Could I be any clearer. “ exclaimed chuck slowly. “ I know I got that.” exasperated Zoey. , “ What I don’t get is what you are or were you came from!” , “ O well then why didn’t you say that before, anyway I`’m a demon for the under world. You know ya see em every day. They may be your boss,shop keeper,doctor or hey they may even be you mother in law. Your human eye just can’t for who or what they really are. Here, let me help you up.” Zoey was parallelized in fear and confusion. But she got up anyways and they walked home together. They had a nice conversation together but when the got home it had to end, Zoey said facing the door, “So when am i going to see you again” but when she turned around he had already whipped away. She will always miss Chuck.

    • Beau says:

      The monster scratched Zoey on the arm. Zoey screamed
      in pain. She backed up but to her surprise she was right up
      on the edge of a cliff. If she moved one step back she would
      fall. The monster took one step back then ran towards her.
      Zoey dodges the monster and the monster falls to its death.
      Suddenly she hears cracking noises. The ground beneath
      her collapses. Zoey fell but she grabbed a plant root.
      She holds on for dear life. All of a sudden the root snaps and
      Zoey fell to her death. Zoey wakes up in relief, she can’t believe
      that it was just a dream.

      • Seth says:

        He reached out to grab Zoey, but it was to late. The monster had already got a hold of Zoey’s arm. She franticly tried to pull herself away, but the monster was holding on too tight. She pushed it off of her and ran, but the monster was in front of her. She turned to run the other way but he was there again. She tried to run right then left and he was there too. She looked all around her and he was everywhere. She ran to him and said, “ Please, let me go, I’ll give you anything, please!” It replied with a deep, heavy voice, “On only ONE condition” “What is that one condition?” asked Zoey.
        “We trade places.” “W-w-what do you mean?” “You be the devil, and I be Zoey.” Just then, It ripped Zoey’s heart out and he ripped his out to. He put his heart in her chest and hers in his. Now he had his life back, and for the actual Zoey, well she wasn’t so lucky.

    • Kiira says:

      When she circled around she soon realized that it was just her father. Or was it? Zoey was able to catch her breath for once. She was exhausted from all the running she had done. Her ‘father’ helped her up and they started on their way home. They soon arrived at the front door of their beautiful home. As Zoey entered her home she looked back and saw that her ‘father’ was shutting the door suspiciously. Zoey didn’t think anything was wrong so she continued on her way to the living room. She sat down on the couch and started reading her favorite book. All of the sudden everything got twisted around. Zoey felt huge gust of wind go through her house. She looked at the door and saw that it was closed, she looked around to see if all the windows were shut. Zoey was puzzled everything was closed. She didn’t know why she felt the gust of wind. Maybe it was just her and she was still paranoid of what had happened earlier that evening. Zoey heard a strange noise coming from the kitchen. She opened the door silently trying not to make a sound. She gasped in terror. It was the demon!

    • Alexa says:

      Grabbed her hand. She had her eyes closed. Waiting for pain or torture to pass though her but instead she felt warm fur and a gentle tug. She slowly opened her eyes to see the monster smiling with a toothy grin. She started to lean forward to get up. The beast slowly lifted her, to her feet. Once she was standing straight up Zoey thanked the gentle giant and started to walk away before the monster could attack. The devil gave a trembling growl and bolted toward her. Zoey ran in panic but the monster was to fast for her. The beast grips her shoulder with a firm claw. Zoey stared to scream in panic but was out of breath. She tripped and fell. She started to cry in pain. Her knee was scraped. She could hear the monsters breath breathing in….. and ….. out. She looked up with her face red, cheeks puffy and her eyes watering. The monster handed Zoey her purse and flew away. Zoey was confused, “All of that just to return her purse to her?” Suddenly her whole family and friends ran toward her. Her face was bright red. Her dad lifted her back home and her best friend Stephenie followed him with a first add kit.

    • serena says:

      picked her up and carried her off into a old abandoned house. When he finally set her down she through punches at him and tried to kick him but nothing seemed to work. After she was done her thing he let out a noise so loud she had to plug her ears. In the next couple of minutes she was surrounded by at least 50 of the monsters. She closed her eyes and hopped for the best when she opened her eyes she didn’t see anything but a black wall. She wondered where she was and in an instant she felt a sharp jabbing pain in her side she looked and had been stabbed with a knife. She then woke up and was startled when she figured out it was all a dream.

  11. Madison says:

    The Old man in the Window

    She was reading a book she looked up. There in the window she saw an old man reaching toward her gasping,”Come to me,Come to me’’ she screamed her father burst in then, the old man disappeared from the window her father stared at her in confusion. He helped her stand up and took her downstairs where her mother ask what happen are you all right? She took a deep breath and spoke,”Th…there was an old mm….man in m…m…..my window he t..tried to grab m..m..me.” Her father leaped up and ran to the phone he picked up the phone and put in 911 it rang and rang but no one answered and then some answered,”Hello this is Bloody Wood police station what is emergency.”Her father answered in fear,”An old man try to grab my daughter throw her window we need help know!”We’re on our way sir just stay com and keep your daughter away from the windows. The woman answered errantly the young girls father answered softly,”OK.’’Then after her father placed the phone down they heard something creeping down the stairs and saw………….

    • Madison says:

      Plz reply 😀

    • #Mariah says:

      They couldn’t believe who it was! But it wasn’t the same person who tried to grab her, it it was much taller and swiftly walked down stairs. The daughter had noticed her family vanished and the tall person had very white long hair near its ankles and had full black eyes and when she blinked it zoomed right up into her face, she screamed and attempted to run but couldn’t. She had noticed he had a beard so assumed it was a male. A extremely tall guy probably near 9 feet tall. But he didn’t crash into the roof. She looked down toward her feet and noticed they were literally stuck to the ground, she tugged and pulled but it was no use. She was stuck, she heard her parents calling her name, it sounded like it was coming from the attic. The extremely tall guy looked up the stair case and swiftly ran up to them and heard a loud bang and her feet were free. There was a strange rhythm of knocking at the door, she ran over to the door and there for her excitement was the police. She told them to look up in the attic, so there was about three cops and they were armed. They quietly ran up the stair case and went up the ladder leading up to the attic. The other two cops were bombarding her with useless questions, then the three other cops came down to her surprise laughing while holding a life size doll with long white hair. “Where are your own parents?” The cops said with angry but historical faces. She gave them a strange face and gave a sarcastic like laugh “They are up there aren’t they?” now a concerned girl pushing for answers. They denied it and decided to give the station a call when they all hear a loud banging sound coming down the stairs, and to all of their surprise they see a scary vicious old man! She ran behind the cop with most armour on. The old man had a weapon but quickly vanished into thin air. There was a loud knock behind them all and the parents were home with the worlds most worried face on. Probably because there were five cop cars outside their house! They told the cops they were fine so they slowly backed out of the house with a shocked face. Once they got into their cars they sped away. The parents turned around and asked what had happened, but the girl just was happy to see them again and smiled.

    • Alexa says:

      Her kitten Stacy. She thought that her kitten was lost during a snow storm last year but she must have hidden up stairs. Filled with joy she ran toward her kitten. Her kitten was super dirty and need a good wash. She grabbed Stacy and her hair brush. She slowly stroked the noted parts of fur. Five minutes later there was a knock at the door. Stacy ran behind a chair. She ran after her while her dad opened the front door to see who was there. The cops were standing at the front door with a few fireman as well. With out hesitating two of the police ran into the room and hustled up the stairs. Her father shout the door as soon as all the police and fireman had entered the room. She griped her kitten and followed her dad into the kitchen to grab a snack. She looked out the window and saw the man again. In horror she screamed and hide behind Stacy. Her father called the cops down stairs and pointed toward the window. The police ran out side and found…..

      • matthew says:

        He walked down the stairs and looked in the laundry room and he saw an old man that was hanging a dead person, his heart started to pound very rapidly he ran upstairs and told everyone while doing that he herd footsteps coming up the stairs. He went into a panic so he told his family to follow him into the attic until the cops came. He thought that it was safe in the attic because it was the only room with a lock but they had made a huge mistake there was one of the old mans killer friend was waiting for them . The daughter screamed so loud that the old mans friend passed out the family had to get out but they couldn’t because they new the old man was downstairs and they did not know how many killers were in the house. All he new that he had to get that body away from his family so it didn’t wake up.

    • #Mariah says:

      They couldn’t believe who it was! But it wasn’t the same person who tried to grab her, it it was much taller and swiftly walked down stairs. The daughter had noticed her family vanished and the tall person had very white long hair near its ankles and had full black eyes and when she blinked it zoomed right up into her face, she screamed and attempted to run but couldn’t. She had noticed he had a beard so assumed it was a male. A extremely tall guy probably near 9 feet tall. But he didn’t crash into the roof. She looked down toward her feet and noticed they were literally stuck to the ground, she tugged and pulled but it was no use. She was stuck, she heard her parents calling her name, it sounded like it was coming from the attic. The extremely tall guy looked up the stair case and swiftly ran up to them and heard a loud bang and her feet were free. There was a strange rhythm of knocking at the door, she ran over to the door and there for her excitement was the police. She told them to look up in the attic, so there was about three cops and they were armed. They quietly ran up the stair case and went up the ladder leading up to the attic. The other two cops were bombarding her with useless questions, then the three other cops came down to her surprise laughing while holding a life size doll with long white hair. “Where are your own parents?” The cops said with angry but historical faces. She gave them a strange face and gave a sarcastic like laugh “They are up there aren’t they?” now a concerned girl pushing for answers. They denied it and decided to give the station a call when they all hear a loud banging sound coming down the stairs, and to all of their surprise they see a scary vicious old man! She ran behind the cop with most armour on. The old man had a weapon but quickly vanished into thin air. There was a loud knock behind them all and the parents were home with the worlds most worried face on. Probably because there were five cop cars outside their house! They told the cops they were fine so they slowly backed out of the house with a shocked face. Once they got into their cars they sped away. The parents turned around and asked what had happened, but the girl just was happy to see them again and happily hugged them both and the parents were extremely shocked.

    • aliya says:

      it was the same old man that tried to grab the girl throw the window they tried she tried to run but he was a lot older and faster. swiffuly he ggrabbed the girl and left jest befor the bloody wood police staion arrivedit was the same old man that tried to grab the girl throw the window they tried she tried to run but he was a lot older and faster. swiffuly he ggrabbed the girl and left jest befor the bloody wood police staion arrivedit was the same old man that tried to grab the girl throw the window they tried she tried to run but he was a lot older and faster. swiftly he grabbed the girl and left jest before the bloody wood police station arrived. The police station barged in wondering what happened, but all they saw was the mother and father falling down onto the ground bursting into tears. “whats rough whats rough” they shouted, “m m my daughter is gone.” they cried. “We will find her!” they shouted. They searched abnd searched but all they found were voices and shadows. so they went back to the parents and told them the bad news. The next morning the girl woke up, then stood up and saw him he was tall man with short dark hair and very powerful and said “I am your father.” your name is Melany and your my daughter. Melany was shock, but she know it was the truth her mom was married twice and she looked nothing like her fake father, she even had a photo of him and her mom. She was finally home.

  12. Asia says:

    Something is drastically wrong! Every time Nick Matthews picks up the telephone there are strange noises such as a clicking noise, sometimes a beeping noise, or possibly talking in some kind of different language. He decided to leave the phone alone for a while, he needed to stop thinking about this because he has to practise for the concert later. Nick was the lead singer of the band “Get Scared” and right now they were on tour so they had a concert almost every night for the next month and a half. To get his mind off of this weird thing happening with the telephone he went outside of the Colosseum he was going to perform at and signed things for his fans. But something was wrong…. there were only about fifty people waiting outside! “Were they all inside already?” wondered Nick, he thought for a bit until he concluded that it was probably just because most of them were inside and there weren’t many because he is now the lead singer of Get Scared again after leaving for a few years, in the time that Nick wasn’t singing there was a different lead singer that everybody seemed to like more named Joel. After signing the objects that his few fans had he went back into his dressing room and waited to be called out to perform. An hour passed and he still wasn’t called out, the show should have started fifteen minutes ago! “Maybe there’s just some technical difficulties and the show is running behind..” thought Nick. Another hour passed.. “I should probably go see whats going on..” Nick thought to himself as he got up and out of the dressing room. But as soon as he stepped out of his dressing room he saw something that made him step back in shock with his jaws dropped open and his eyes wide. He wasn’t in the Colosseum anymore…He couldn’t even tell where he was, so after staring in shock for a few minutes he wandered around looking for clues of how he got here or where he was and how to get back. While walking around Nick finally spotted another person, he walked up to the person and tapped him on the back, but then he realized it wasn’t a person.. it was some sort of creature.. he couldn’t quite tell what type of creature though. Nick ran as fast as his legs could go, he looked behind him, bad idea.. There was the creature, as hideous as always. Nick shrieked loudly and ran faster. But then suddenly…

    • #Mariah says:

      The “creature” that Nick has seen earlier turned out to be a severely deformed human. The deformed human was a flesh eating cannibal. The cannibal was chasing Nick for about three blocks when he looked back the cannibal was gone, so Nick walked for about roughly four hours looking for other humans but he found nothing he was going around a corner, when suddenly he saw a huge blinding light crashing into him. Nick screamed on the top of his lungs! Then in that exact same moment he felt someone shaking him, Nick opened his eyes and saw Craig Mabbit. He was shocked because the last thing he seen was the bright light crashing into him. As Craig seen that Nick was waking up he gave a huge gasp of relief and helped Nick up. As Nick adjusted to his surroundings he realized he was back in his dressing room, “Here drink this” said Craig as he handed a glass of cold water to Nick. Craig had told Nick that they had cancelled the concert so he walked over the his private bathroom and closed the door behind him locking it as well. Nick leaned against the bathroom door for awhile trying to figure out if this was reality or not. Then out of every other thing that could happen all of the power went out. He reached down to his pocket for his phone, when he got it out it was dead. Since his phone was dead he decided to go look for Craig, he got about two metres away from the bathroom when he ran into a stiff board like figure. He felt the board like figure breathing heavily on himself. It had to be Craig who else could get into his dressing room? The lights went on in a instant and standing right there was a flesh eating cannibal! But not just anyone, it was Craig…
      Nick felt a ice freezing liquid our onto him, he struggled to move. When he did happen to open his eyes he saw Dahvie Vanity and Jayy Von Monroe laughing at him.

  13. Sam says:

    Jacob needed a job. He walked about three blocks when he felt it.
    A cold chill fell below his back, and a bad haze rose above his head like a bad dream,
    an uneasy feeling eased over Jacob. With his short haircut, untrimmed beard and dirty jacket which
    made him look a bit foreign when going to a job interview. It was the only thing he had after
    moving from the countryside, he had to sell most of his things to move into a overpriced apartment.
    The city made Jacob feel strange and was new and alien to him, as he walked Jacob was nervous and
    tense he had to get this job it was his last resort. He had attempted to work at several different jobs
    such as iron working, an entrepreneur, and a road clearer. This job was at bottle depot, he had arrived.
    Jacob walked into the manager’s office and murmured a ‘’hello’’ and was brought in… When he walked out of the Manager’s office he had never been so happy he had been employed by the bottle depot!
    As he sorted bottles for the rest of the day he had been stopped. The lights went out and screaming was
    heard throughout the distance… Jacob awoke with a start, the screaming had left the dark room. But
    something had changed, although the screaming had gone there was a pounding on the door… He approached the door slowly and thought what could be on the other side of the door? He opened the door with a sharp click and saw the most horrifying thing in his life… It looked dead but walked
    it was wounded but still walked in a shambling pace. He slammed the door shut and his heart racing
    he started to run, he smashed the back door over and ran into a ragged girl with a red sweatshirt and
    blue jeans they both screamed and then realized they were each human. The girl was about sixteen
    years of age, half the age of Jacob, her brown hair was matted and dirty. They dusted themselves off
    and realized that there was no time to waste. They started to run and the monsters started to pick up their pace, their numbers ascended to at least a hundred and they were gaining on them….
    they passed a couple of blocks and Jacob screamed, ‘’Follow me!’’ the girl obeyed and followed.
    They crossed an intersection and the monsters closed in on all sides! Lucky for Jacob his apartment
    was right there. They bolted into the elevator punched in the button ‘’4’’ and their hearts stopped
    as the monsters were running into the building and the elevator doors were STILL closing! The monsters almost succeeded in prying the elevator doors open but failed. Jacob and the girl were out of
    breath. Jacob asked the girl’s name, she replied, ‘’Jessie.” They ascended the elevator and arrived at
    his apartment, Jessie slammed the door and locked it Jacob took off the wall his old hunting rifle
    and his revolver. They gathered food, water, and ammunition Jacob loaded his gun and Revolver,
    grabbed his old car keys and they dashed out the door… Jacob started to drive, he didn’t know how long
    or where to but he had to get out of the city. Jessie told Jacob that the monsters were called “Zombies.”

    • Gurisha says:

      They drove for about 5 hours when they decided they needed to stop. When Jessie and Jacob got out of the old pick up truck they realized they were in a different town. They both noticed this town was….different. It seemed quiet,a bit too quiet. They walked further until they found a sign saying”danger” Jesse starting trembling “Lets go back this isn’t safe.” she whispered. Jacob was interested to see what was beyond this sign. “No,let’s go further,we don’t have any other option!”They walked quietly through out the town. There was no people,plywood hammered into every building. Jacob whipped around, “Something just touched me.”They sprinted as fast as they could to the other side of the street,until they approached a tall building. “lets go in.”Jessie spoke. They walked in slowly, dust and debris hitting there faces. There was a dark figure standing in the corner making gargling noises. It slowly trudged over to them, its face was rotted,limbs missing everywhere….”Its a z-zombie!” Jessie screamed in horror.”RUN!” screamed Jacob. They ran down the street, zombies pouring in from every corner, and every building.

    • Asia says:

      They drove without saying a word, too frightened to think of anything to say. After a while they heard a strange noise, “What could it be?” they both wondered silently to themselves. About one second passed until they realized it must be a zombie! Jessie slowly turned toward the back of the car then she saw it. About one hundred zombies were coming to them! “Drive faster!!” screamed Jessie. Jacob turned around and as soon as he saw them, he pressed his foot on the gas as hard as he could. They sped far away for about two hours until they slowed down. “I don’t think they’ll be able to catch up for quite a long time now, after all, they are pretty slow from what I’ve seen” explained Jacob. “Yeah, well I guess we better stop here and try to find some shelter, got all your stuff?” replied Jessie. Jacob went out of the car and looked in the trunk for all the things he brought, but to his surprise, they weren’t there! “Umm…I think we may have a little problem…” Jacob said nervously. Jessie just looked at him, “Uh oh..What could possibly make this worse?” She thought, but only in her head. Then she talked aloud, “What is it?” she said, trying to contain her slight amount of rage. “Heh…Well um…The thing is..” he was about to explain but Jessie cut him off. “Just tell me already!” Jessie told him, becoming slightly annoyed. So he told her, then they argued for a bit until they heard the same strange noise again. But this time the noise was louder, and it was getting louder every few seconds. They both turned their head and saw the crowd of zombies again, but there were more this time and they didn’t have any weapons. Jacob screamed like a little girl, and Jessie was too afraid to scream so her jaw just dropped and no audible sounds came out. They ran for their life.

    • Madison says:

      Jessie slowly fell asleep.When she awake in they were half way to a airport,she stared at Jacob and said in a long yawn,”Why are we going to the airport at a time like this.”Jacob spoke why because its safe there cops are boarding people on to planes to send them to Canada,its the only place close to U.S.A thats safe.Jacob turned his head back to the road and dodged a zombie and had made it to the air port. Then they got out and shot the creatures from a distance and made there way in they got on plane and flow to Canada and then made a life there but after 4 years of peace the zombies made to Canada but were quickly gotten rid of.After working as a scientist for the last 9 years in peace with out zombies Jacob found a cur for the zombies in the U.S.A you just had freeze them and then thaw the out after 4 days each sap port then the cops had freed all the people from there Enid curse of being a zombie.

  14. Seth says:

    On a strange night, there seemed to be a chill in the air as George woke up. Usually, his neighbor Ted would be outside working in his garden before he was even up , but this morning he wasn’t. Later, George went over and knocked on Ted’s door because he was a little concerned that he hadn’t seen Ted all day so far. He rang the door bell and there was no answer. Once more he rang it and yet again there was no answer. He rang it one final time and there was no answer. He peeked through the window and all the lights were off. George thought Ted was just shopping or something, but he never really saw him leave or hear his truck, like he usually does when it gets turned on so he decided to go look in the back yard for the truck. Just as he peered around the corner he saw something on the next corner. It startled him a bit but he got it back together and decided to move on. In the back yard he saw something that looked like a face in the window and he ran into the house to see what it was, then it came at him…

    • Matther E says:

      Blood shot eyes red pupil Faint scream It was starring into George’s eyes and George said Quietly “What what do you want please don’t hurt me”
      The thing Moaned “Why are people scared of me”
      George was pail white and he looked at the ground and said “I do not know”
      The thing said “WELL FIGURE IT OUT GEORGE”
      George looked at the ground once more and he fell through a hole that appeared in the ground and kept falling and falling and falling.
      George woke up and he was in his bed laying there with his face covered in sweat and his eyes where bleeding.

      • matthew says:

        Then a demon started to crawl toward you and it started to climb on the walls and next thing he new the demon was in the corner of the room and it was up in the corner of the walls it was hissing at him. While the demon was hissing he ran into the attic and to his surprise there was Ted worshipping the devil and thats why the demon was was in his house. George had no choice but to stop Ted from haunting the hole neighbourhood so he tried to pull Ted away from the candles and the picture of the devil but he was possessed and Ted had the devil speaking for him. It sounded like the devil had a deep voice and he had blood shot eyes as Ted thought that he was to far into this and it had to stop so he body slammed ted and…

  15. Beau says:

    It was a strange night there seemed to be a chill in the air.
    Dan was in bed, but not tired. He had been worrying about the Bmx
    race tomorrow. Dan got up and looked at his number plate.
    He mumbled, “I should get some sleep then that way I could calm
    down a little. The next morning Dan was getting ready for the
    Bmx championship.”Hey mom where are my fox gloves” exclaimed
    Dan, “I don’t know” said his mom. ” What would you like for breakfast
    Dan” said his mom. “Frosted Flakes” exclaimed Dan. Dans mom walked
    over to Dan and said, ” don’t be nervous Dan, I know you will do good
    at the race today” ” thanks” exclaimed Dan. Dan and his mom got in
    the truck and drove away. By the time they got there everybody
    was practising. The race track manager yelled, “15 minutes left
    for practise runs.” ” Dan in a worried voice said ” I’m going for a few
    practise runs.” Dan approached the gate with other riders. The
    manager yelled ” riders ready… getset…GO!”

    • tj olaney says:

      Dan pedaled as fast as could, he was in first place. He said to himself, “man, those Frosted Flakes really helped.” Dan suddenly started slowing down, the other riders began passing him one by one. Dan was thinking to himself, “oh man, i’m not off to a good start.” Dan fell in to last place, he started to wonder if maybe a healthier breakfast might have been a better idea. Dan kept a steady pace, the flagger announced the last lap. That steady pace was finally catching him up, his heart was racing, he was breathing like a dog and he was exhausted. He was not paying attention to his position, he was just thinking about being in first place and getting the checkered flag. When he started paying attention to his positioning, he was in first! He was coming up to the last corner when he popped a tire but he kept on saying to himself, “I can make it,” and he pedaled it out to the end of the race. Dan was first to the checkered flag.

    • beau says:

      Slam the gate goes down and the riders are out. Dan is out first
      the other riders were right behind him. When Dan went around
      another rider crashed into DA

    • beau says:

      Slam the gate goes down and the riders are out. Dan pulls
      out first. The other riders are right behind him. when Dan goes around
      the corner another rider crashes into him, suddenly all the other
      riders are down accept for one rider. Dan got back up and pedalled
      as fast as he could, he was right behind the other rider. The other rider
      lost control and crashed. When Dan looked behind he noticed another
      rider was right behind him, the finish line was around the corner. Dan
      crossed the finish line first and he won the trophy.

    • aliya says:

      He frantically raced down the track but in the corner of his eye he saw a biker gaining on to him so he throttled his bike a little more but the biker caught up to him and wanted to win badly. The biker called up his biker friends and they got one biker to go in front of Dan. One behind him and on either sides of him. All of a sudden the biker on one of the sides left and the bicker on the other side slammed into him making it so Dan lost control. Dan hit a log and the bike went flying into the air came down and landed on him. He was knocked out cold. Dan woke up the next morning screaming and yelling, “where an I?” “what happed to me!” “am I dead!” nurses doctors friends and family started filling the room .“You broke 6 bones!” exclaimed the doctor. will Dan ever race again?

  16. tj says:

    As soon as he arrived, he could sense that something was out of place…as he pulled in to the driveway he saw a black shadow run behind his house. He snatched the groceries with fear in his eyes he sprinted in to the house. While putting the groceries on the counter he heard a bloody scream, ‘‘Help me”,he listened for a second, again, ‘‘Help me”

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Please add to your starter T J. There is a word count minimum for this activity of 150 words and you are at 67 words.

    • tj olaney says:

      The old man took of his jacket and placed on the stool he walked in to the room and what he saw no one new what it was it appeared to be a mother and baby tied to a chair. The mother was wearing a elephant suit and the baby was wearing a buzlighter suit with a teddy bear strapped to her chest }{ he stormed in to the room ”Are you Ok”he wispered. ”Ya im fine we got tied up buy this person with a black mask on”ok ” He might still be around here so be cautious.

      • sydney says:

        As the elderly man creped around each room peaking through holes and turning around to make sure nobody caught the lady and the baby. The third time the man turned around he felt an arm around his neck and a piece of rough cloth around his mouth. He awoke to be in a chair next to the lady with. Upstairs in house he heard a ruckus rumbling of metal and silver draws closed and opened. He sat there as the plan ran through his head. I can see a cellphone in the ladies back pocket, We could dial 911 then leave it on so they could hear everything and come. I whispered the lady my plan as she agree. As she dialled the number they heard as I gave them clues to the house address and what was going o. They came in two minutes flat everything was okay I thought. I am an American hero . My American legacy will live on forever in peoples hearts.

      • gurisha says:

        He saw a flash from the corner of his eye. He turned around quickly and saw a bright object on a table on the other side of the room. He quietly tiptoed over to it and, discovered that it was some kind of orb. He touched and it’s texture was like some sort of gelatin. Beside the orb was a paper saying “eat me” he chuckled as it reminded him of Alice In Wonderland. He had to make a decision whether if he should eat it or not. He decided whatever it was, he obviously had to eat it. He cupped the orb and it got even brighter. He nervously took a small bite out of it. He felt a wave of strength come over him. In excitement he shoved the whole orb in his mouth. The strength was overwhelming so he passed out. He woke up later that day, and saw the same black figure run across the room….

      • gurisha says:

        Buzz Lightyear**

  17. serena says:

    The Necessity of Water

    It was a strange night, there seemed to be a chill in the air,all was motionless. No sound, not even the hum of a cricket. The next morning a gentle breeze carries a faint sound across the Savannah. Then it appears – a baby zebra. The herd comes to welcome her it’s April they name the young one March. She has not a single care in the world, but that will all soon change. As the newcomer adjusts to her new life something is happening that she is not aware of, the days are getting hotter and the watering holes start to dry up but March is too distracted to notice. On the first day of May she starts to notice that something is missing, her favourite watering hole is now just a small puddle. By the end of the day it vanished! The next day when she goes to eat the grass it doesn’t taste as moist as it usually does. There is not a single green blade left. The only thing left for food is a small bush but within minutes her herd has consumed all of it, nothing is left. Starvation drives the herd to leave in search of food but for days they don’t find any. Every day is a struggle for survival most babies wouldn’t survive but March does for now. The next morning the herd finds a small patch of grass but they aren’t the first to find it there is also Indian buffalo here, none of them feel like sharing. One of the herd members is to hungry that it is willing to fight for food but he doesn’t succeed, the buffalo brakes his ribs and he suffocates to death. So the heard moves on in search of easier food. When they come upon a small watering hole they find something that they don’t really like, lions. And they are all hungry.

    • Beau says:

      The lions circled the herd. March’s mother was standing
      over her when a king sized lion took the mother down.
      March ran for her life. She ran to a little patch of trees and
      hid there until night time, when she came out she
      saw 10-15 zebras that were killed. March wonderd where the rest
      of the herd went, so she decides to look for them. When daybreak
      came March saw a little group of zebras down in the valley. March
      spent all her time with those zebras even though it wasn’t her herd.
      15 years later March was all grown up and she had two baby
      zebras. March showed them how to survive. It was a simple but
      rough life.

    • Mariah L says:

      The Lions looked up and began stalking to wards the Zebras. As the lions were beside them the biggest Lion started to circle them and circled until one of the other Zebras decided to make a run for it but only made it about six metres until the lions all ran after it and ripped it’s beautiful fur and ate the poor Zebra. All the other Zebras decided it was a chance for them all to make a run for it but they were all starving and can barely move but they ran anyways. March was running at a fast speed with the others.’No sign of other lions’ March thought as they all slowed down near a big tree with tons of birds. The birds all flew fast away as the Zebras approached the tree for a nice relaxing rest. But only rested for roughly one hour. As the sun began to set they pack decided it would be safer to start searching again. As all of the Zebras were walking they came across a gigantic water hole! They all got so excited and began to drink. The dehydration they had a few days ago vanished within a couple of minutes!

    • matthew says:

      The buffaloes were not going to give up this watering hole because they have not drunken water in 3 days so they had to drink here the lions looked like they wouldn’t be moving anytime soon so they had to stand and fight or they had to die of dehydration but all buffaloes stand and fight so thats what they did. The lions were the first ones to attack and if the buffaloes wanted to defeat the lions they had to attack one with 3 buffaloes but luckily they had 9 more animals so they had a bit of an advantage they still were going to have to work super hard and than boom a lion attacked the buffaloes so they started fighting and soon there were 3 buffaloes dead and 1 lion they still had the advantage so they used it and took out 3 more lions but lost 1 buffalo. The lions tried attacking one more time and lost a lion but got 2 buffaloes the lions were still out numbered so they ran away and after that 2 buffaloes died of dehydration but they had won the watering hole so they were golden and very joyful.

  18. Brendan R. says:

    One night she looked out the window and saw the neighbours…They were hauling something that looked familiar. Alisa was never really fond or interested in her neighbours. She had her own life far away from here. She never cared about what they did or what happened to them. But tonight something was suspicious about their actions. It would bug her if she didn’t find out what was wrong.. or something even worse could happen. Alisa looked a little closer at what they were moving it seemed to be a rug. But it was more than that. Alisa suddenly felt strange. There was something wrapped in the rug. Now she was starting to feel plain horrified, she wanted her husband, Arnold. Unfortunately he’s been gone for what seemed a lifetime. What had happened to him. Now the neighbours were tossing whatever it was into the back of their red pickup. Worried Alisa wrote down the license plate. They drove away and in a moment of panic Alisa decided to follow. Getting into her black F-150 was a breeze. She had practised it all the time when she was or was almost late for work. Being a cars sales women she felt that she had a good working understanding of cars. After about an hour and a half of sticking to the shadows with her head light s off she felt like a spy but that would change in a moment or so. The red truck about fifty yards in front of her started to slow down, as did she. When the truck pulled over she parked around the corner and got out. They started talking but it was muffled so she could not hear what about. As they unpacked there haul they carried down to the lake. She could only hear the chirping of crickets now. She followed them down to the lake and then they toss the rug into the lake and as the do so it unfolds a bit. She sees a face, ARNOLD! Then as the body splashes into the water the big bulky thug pulls out a gun and shoots Arnold while grunting, “ This is for the debt AND the hassle!’’ As the gun goes off Alissa squeals. “What was that!’’ yelled one of the thugs. Then they start trudging toward her. She cant move shes frozen! As thug number one turns toward her she kicks him in the groin in desperate hopes to stop him. And as the Brute leans over griming in pain she bolts! But not for long the second monstrosity tries shooting at her and misses but she gets distracted and runs into a tree. When she wakes up the two killers are dragging her then they stop and tossed her against an old tree stump they tied her up dumped ice water on her and left her for the night.

    • Beau says:

      Alissa was weeping because of the loss of her husband. She
      tried to get some sleep, with her fur coat she was able to stay
      warm. The next day the thugs came back and gave her
      a slice of bread and a little glass of water, then they left without
      saying a single word. Alissa thought that the thugs were going
      to leave her there to die. The next morning the thugs never came
      back. She waited for a while but no one came. Suddnely Alissa
      hears a truck coming. The truck stops and one little man with a long white
      beard gets out and asked what happened? Alissa said “two thugs
      captured me”. The man cut her loose and took her home. When she got inside
      she seen her husband Arnold. Alissa said ” I thought you were dead.” “No, that was my twin brother that was killed, his name was John. He was in this gang and he did not pay his debt”. Alissa’s eye’s were shining with joy, she was so happy that Arnold was not killed.

    • Sarah says:

      When Alisa woke up the next morning she was still tied up. There was someone walking on the sidewalk when she decided to yell, “Help! Help!” The person came toward her and she realized that it was her other neighbor, named Julia. Julia helped untie her and questioned, “What happened? Why are you tied up?” Alisa didn’t know what to say so she just lied and said, “I don’t know.” After Julia found out she was ok she continued her walk. Once Julia was out of sight Alisa ran to the lake to see if see could see the rug that Arnold was in. She knew they didn’t throw him far because she distracted them. But she saw nothing, and then she thought that they must have taken him so she could not know where he is. Looked all over the property when she saw this shed. It had no lock so she decided to look in. She saw the carpet, but Arnold wasn’t in it. They must have put him some where she couldn’t think of.

  19. Kiira says:

    The Retched Mansion.

    Everyone avoided the big old mansion. It was believed to have a haunted figure lurking around. Once on a chilly fall day a family with a young couple and 3 children were visiting the city. As they strolled through the streets they saw the old retched house but it never crossed their minds that one day they might be in there. As they arrived back at their hotel they were getting their sweet little children ready for bed but soon realized that little 4 year old Lacy was missing. The parents soon began to panic, they had never been in a situation like this before. They put the children in their snug beds, gave them a kiss goodnight, and said, “We’ll be back soon, I love you.” They shot out of their room as fast as they could and headed for the streets. Soon they were at people’s houses asking if they had seen a little girl wondering around, they were frantically running down the streets screaming, “Lucy, where are you?”As they reached the end of the street that’s when they saw the retched old mansion. The mother darted a look at the father, it was a look of horror.

    • matthew says:

      When the mother looked back at the retched old mansion she saw a figure in the window so she thought that must be Lucy so she ran inside and to her surprise she heard the doors slam and then she tried to pull on the door to open it but the was locked. To get the bad thoughts out of her head she decided to remember why she is in the haunted house in the first place… To find Lucy. While she was making her way though the mansion her husband said maybe we should split up so we can cover more ground, She was surprised he had said that because she always thought that he was not the kind of person that liked scary things and that didn’t like being in scary places. She said yes though and he said he would look in the basement and she would go into the attic while she was up there she say that there was a hole in the wall so she looked in it and…

    • Alexa says:

      Nether of them wanted to look in side the horrid mansion but they both knew if they didn’t their chances of finding precious Lacy. Taking a deep breath Lacy’s mother quickly steeped toward the revolting mansion. Her husband shortly followed. Once making it to the colossal front door she knocked with a firm fist. After waiting for five minutes for someone to answer Lacy’s mother was getting impatient and started to twist the door nob. When she turned it and the door creaked open. She pocked her head in side to see if anyone was home but decided quickly that she and her husband were the only living things in the mansion. She quietly stepped into the main entrance with her husband and quietly echoed. “ Lacy…. Lacy where are you? “ After a few minutes she decided to walk around the house and try to find a trace of Lacy. Suddenly the door slams shut with a loud thud. They turn in panic to see Lacy’s favourite doll siting on the ground. They know shes in here some were!

    • Sarah says:

      The mother looked back at the retched old mansion and shouted “Lucy! Lucy! Are you in there?” There was no sign of Lucy but the mother and father just had a horrible feeling that somehow Lucy got in there. So they raced in the door not even thinking that someone else in there. They were in the first floor of the mansion. The mother and the father split up. The father going one way and the mother going another. When the mother was at the end of the hall she heard a scream from one of the rooms at the other end of the hall. The mother and the father darted into that room, when the scream was gone and the door was shut and locked. They both were pounding on the door to let them out. The door slowly opened. On the outside of the door, there was Lucy. The mother grabbed her and asked, “Are you ok?” Lucy nodded but had a terrible look on her face. When all three of them looked back and saw a shadowy figure walking toward them. They all ran as fast as they could out the door, when the shadowy figure stopped at the door.

      • KoBeBSH123 says:

        They stopped at the front gate and looked back and the dad Suddenly tripped in the middle of the hall way when. Lucy shouted,”stop!” and mother looked back and seen the dad with the black figure. While the doors closed she put down Lucy and ran toward the door screaming,”LET HIM GO!” When she got to the door they shut closed. Right as she got to the door she went back to Lucy and took her home put her to bed and invited some friends over the talked. At there kitchen table told there her friends what happened suddenly she thought some stuff she told her friends what she was planning in her head. They were going back for the dad when they got there that’s when it all started.

    • serena says:

      She knew then that they would have a very small chance of finding her but she would not give up. She approached the mansion cautiously and heard strange noise coming out but she was not going to stop. Something grabbed her leg and she then disappeared. She was trying to find something to grab but she was going so fast she couldn’t see anything. When she came to a stop she found herself in a room full of people and her daughter but they were all asleep. She saw a creature come to her and before she knew it she was asleep to she saw her daughter and the house she was in but she didn’t know where she was all she saw was strange looking creatures. After she was there for about an hour she realized that those monsters were the ones that had brought her into the big mansion when she came close to one everything went whit and she never woke up again.

  20. Sarah says:

    He flashed his teeth with a evil grin and through his fury,sharp clawed hands toward her and Zoey started to yell, “Help! Help! Help!” When the beast came even closer to her throat. Then a stray dog came out of nowhere, the dog started gnawing on the beast’s leg. The beast started to cry out a shriek of noise, “Stop it you mutt!” As the beats was yelling at the dog Zoey got up and and started to run with the dog by her side. She thanked the dog for saving her. But to her surprise the alley she was in was a dead end, and by now the beast was walking toward her. Zoey was so scared that she didn’t notice the dog was trying to help her, but he didn’t stand a chance against the beast. Zoey saw a small door next to her that only her and the dog could fit in. When she called the dog the beast realized what she was thinking and while she tried to get in the door the beast tried to grab her and the dog but he was the to late. They were gone through that tiny door.

    • tj says:

      Zoey and the dog were in the tiny room for what felt like an hour. It had only been 20 minutes. Zoey peeked from behind the door to see if the beast was gone and it was . Zoey and the dog sprinted out of the room and didn’t stop until they got home. When they reached the front porch of Zoey’s house Zoey said to the dog,”What are we goin to do with you?” Zoey and the dog snuck up to her room and when they got there Zoey’s parents asked her, “Who is with you Zoey?” “Oh nobody, just talking to myself” Zoey’s parents came up to see whats she was doing but when Zoey heard her parents come she put the dog under her bed. She sat on her bed and was playing Subway Surfers on her Ipod when her parents walked in. Zoey said ,”Hey mom” Zoey’s mom replied,”Hello Zoey.” Wher her mom when back down stairs Zoey pulled the dog out from under her bed,”pheph” she tucked the dog in to a homemade bed and said,”Good night.” In the morning the dog was barking and Zoey didn’t know and her mom came up and took the dog without Zoey knowing. When Zoey woke up she could not find the dog so she just thought the dog found a way out of the house. Zoey didn’t really look for him and a few weeks later it was her birthday and on Zoeys birthday her parents put the dog in a box and gave it to her and she named it Molly Phillip Jackson. And they lived happily ever after.

  21. Cale says:

    Aunt Tamara’s

    As soon as he arrived, he could sense that something was out of place. He arrived at Aunt Tamara’s house. After Three weeks of packing Billy McClain was ready to go to his Aunt’s. But one thing he did not pack for was his final day with AUNT TAMARA!!! His dad Joe McClain was going to drive him on a ten hour road trip. He was going to his Aunts house for summer break because his family was moving to Nova Scotia Halifax Canada. After he got to his aunts his dad left for the summer break. Aunt Tamara was picking carrots from her garden when she hear the car door shut and she started to walk to the front door. Aunt Tamara was walking to Billy she said “ Hi, billy.” Billy started to walk to Aunt Tamara. After a few seconds billy noticed Aunt Tamara looked different. Billy hugged his aunt and they both went inside after Billy’s dad left. Billy watched television with his Aunt in silence for the day. When it was 9:30 Aunt Tamara told Billy to go to bed. When he was lying in bed he heard weird sounds in the walls almost like ghost creeping. Billy could not fall asleep because of those creepy ghost noises. The next day Billy had no sleep… he crawled into the kitchen for some breakfast. Aunt Tamara was making some pancakes for breakfast Billy could smell them… he dashed to the kitchen but he was a little slow because he had no sleep the night before. While he was running he almost fell down the stairs that go directly to the kitchen. After he got to the kitchen Aunt Tamara gave him a pancake to eat but the pancake was weird looking too. He ate the pancake but he felt weird after he ate it. Aunt Tamara and Billy went shopping at the super market for dinner. Aunt Tamara was going to make steak. Billy noticed a jug of juice he asked his Aunt if she could buy it. His aunt bought it. When the where driving home the car battery died and the car suddenly stopped on a train track that was 2 miles away from Aunt Tamara’s house… Then suddenly the train crossing lines fell down and started to blink. Then they heard a train it was getting closer and closer. The train was so close the could see it then the car battery started up with a growl and the train was really close by that time and…

    • Cale says:

      The car zoomed out from the train track and on the road “VVVVVVVVVVVRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMM.” they missed the train by an inch Billy thought they where goners But the car pulled through. Billy and Aunt Tamara drove safly back home and they did not die at they end

  22. Gabrielle says:

    All of a sudden he was trapped! The mysterious man had finally caught Brad in a corner down a back ally. Brad muttered to him self, “What do I do?” He quickly ducked under his arm and whizzed past him running to the end of the ally. There was a surprise waiting there for him, the police. “You’re under arrest.” One of the cops spoke sternly. Brad complained, “For what, what did I do, I would never hurt anyone!” “We never asked if you hurt anyone.” “And that guy back there should be in jail!” “It looks like your both going down to the station.”

    3 months later… Brad admitted to murder. He got sentenced to life in prison. Brad had 2 children and a wife. He seemed like a nice guy but really…

    • aliya says:

      He was the boss of all the evil! It took 20 years for them to free brad, and think that he was a good guy, a guy with a good life and a guy with a good family. o but how they where rough, he was the apposite of every thing they thought! But why did they free him? Brad had plenty of evil people just like him, people every where, one was a judge one was a police and the last one was the president the rest where workers that would do anything Brad said! Brad and his gang were rich, they stole all kinds of things like jewellery gems and even purses of important people. one night there goal was to steel the most impotent and expensive thing in the country, they were going to steel the biggest diamond in the world! it was huge. so that night they sneaked into the museum Brad thought it would be a piece of cake what a dumb spot for a gigantic diamond! So that night Brad got his crew and told them the plan. When they got there they saw guards every where! So they knocked a few guys out and stole there uniforms and they went on the roof but the police and FBI was waiting for Brad and the crew! But how did they figure out? then Brad looked a little harder and saw the betrayer, it was the president, and this time they were sent to jail for life time for sure!

    • Kiira says:

      Nobody knew. As Brad’s family found out he had been arrested and sent to prison the mother was puzzled. He had always been so nice to her and her children. She never knew that he would ever do such a thing. He never acted as if he could. His wife and family soon made their way down to the prison to go see him. As they entered the prison they saw him at the end of the hall sitting on his prison bed. Brad saw them from the distance and shouted his wife’s name and his children’s. They sped down the hall as fast as they could. As brad’s little 5 year old son looked at him in the eyes a tear came trickling down his face. He didn’t know why he did the murder, But he knew that he shouldn’t have. Brad knew that he messed up his life and also his families. Brad’s wife took a good, long look at him. She couldn’t believe what was happening. The family was falling apart.

    • Gabrielle B. :) says:

      Really Brad was a true demon. He had planned to make an escape from prison with one of the best criminals at the prison. Brad had heard that the guy’s name was Emilio Antonio. He had escaped from a Mexican prison before. So Brad figured he could pay some guards to let them out. It was all or nothing. If the guards said no they would be dead. When they got to go outside Brad saw the guards. “Emilio come on the guards.” Brad whispered. They settled it with the guards. They said yes! So when it became time to shower they would escape. It came time. It was time to shower. Brad thought he could hear his own heart beat. Did they escape? Did they get caught by different guards? Did they get shot? Did the guards turn down the offer and arrest them? What happened?

    • Mackenzie G says:

      But turned he out to be a clown and he had a twin brother who really was the demon. They had gotten the wrong brother!!! So the clown’s plan was to break free because he had birthday party to go to in 2 weeks! Once he got to use the phone he would be able to break free with his plane. Yes he had a plane. His plan was to call his mother to bring him his plane so he could break free and go to his birthday party. But it would take his mother at least a week and half to get to the jail where her son was. One week went by and his mother wasn’t there yet. But she was coming they had a master plan. His mother is going to get a police uniform and take her son to the plane and then just leave. It sounded easy but it wasn’t there was a lot of bumps along the road. Brads mom couldn’t fit in the uniform. Then she just made one that fit her and ripped of the badges and put them on hers. It took awhile but she did it before the week ended. It also took her forever to find brads cage. Then she had found him as they were walking out the cop stops them they’re hearts racing. He lets them pass. They got in the plane and the plane won’t start because she had left it on. So brad had to wait for his mom to get fuel. she had finally came back in 3 hours then they left on there way to where the party was. They had made it to the party on time and the cops had found the right brother and put him behind bars where he belonged.

  23. Seth says:

    he was an evil old man that was extremely strong and powerful. Brad pretended to be peoples friends and take them to a back ally and murder them then he hides the body somewhere. Since Brad was so strong, when he found a rock on the ground he picked it up and started making a hole in the wall. Finally, he got to the other side, but it was just another jail cell. Luckily, the cell door was open a crack and he got out, but there was two guards and no other way. He stood in the shadows and snuck around them. Brad grabbed someone from behind and took all of their clothes, but there was a security camera and when the police came after him he had to run. As a police was getting out of his car, Brad ran to him, threw him on the ground, and drove off. Even S.W.A.T was after him now. Brad was rapidly dodging other cars when him and another police car collided. The car that Brad was in flipped and hit the side of a building. Brad didn’t have a seat belt on, so he ended up going threw the wind shield. When he got up he was surrounded by police and S.W.A.T. He started running and they shot. Finally, he was gone.
    He can not kill anymore people. Everyone is safe.

    • Matther E says:

      But after 1 week some one and some how saw brad and they thought that brad was dead so they went over to brad and said “Um excuse me sir may i ask your name”
      Brad said “That is NONE of your business”
      The man said nothing
      Brad said “Good after noon SIR”
      So the man left him and he called the police and said “I think I just saw Brad”
      And the Operator said “Brad who?”
      The man said “Brad Johnson”
      The Operator said nothing
      The Man said “Hello?”
      No one answered so he hung up and went home
      when the man went home he noticed some thing missing and it was a couch he was very confused and he asked his wife what she did with the couch she said “REDRUM”
      The man was confused he said “You want redrum?”
      the told his wife to look at him and she turned her head 360°
      He very scared and ran out side and yelled for help.
      No one answered.
      Suddenly it turned NIGHT the man was so edgy he was screaming at the top of his lungs no one answered he drove into town and there was no one to be seen he turned the corner and saw BRAD.
      BRAD WAS ANGRY.
      The man didnt know why brad was so mad at him he only asked him a question.
      The man walked up to Brad.
      And Brad said that he never should of talked to him.
      The man was confused he just wanted to know.
      Brad looked into his eyes and the man’s eyes turned black.
      The man was at his front door and his wife was telling him to come inside.
      The man was dripping sweat and he had bloody nose.
      His wife had told him he was laying on the car and walked to the front door with his eyes closed.

  24. Aliya says:

    Once upon a time there was an orphan named Tori. She was depressed because she was sent to the orphanage when she was eight years old. She had plenty of friends and plenty of determination to escape. One night, while everybody was asleep, she sneaked out of her room into the hallway. All of a sudden, there was a lady in the hallway that worked at the orphanage and she started chasing Tori. Tori yelled and screamed down the hallway and woke up almost everybody in the building. Her friends woke up too. Tori ran to the door to try and escape but the bolt to unlock the door was stuck and the worker was gaining on her. Her friends knew how much she wanted to escape so they tried to help. They started tackling the worker and, finally, Tori got the bolt undone. She ran into the streets trying to think of a spot she could hide. Then, she had an idea. She thought if she could hide on the beach, nobody would look for her there. So she found the beach and hid behind a sand bank. She fell asleep there for the night. The next morning, she was wondering if she should have stayed in the orphanage with all of her friends where she had food, water and shelter. She went down to the water and dipped her feet in. All of a sudden, something grabbed her and dragged her into the water. But what was “it” and what did “it” want?

    • Gurisha says:

      Tori woke up 1 day later. She looked around frantically realizing she was in some sort of glass dome in the middle of the sea. There was no one around, just beautiful fish and coral. She peered around the dome trying to find any sort of exit, to her surprise there was no exit. Tori wondered “If there is no exit how could i have gotten in here?” She pondered on more trying to find something to eat as she was starving. She found a small cabinet with some stale bread. “This will have to do.” She quickly scarfed down the loaf of bread. Tori felt dripping on the top of her head, she looked around and saw small puddles of water on the ground. She darted her head up and discovered a crack in the dome. Minute by minute the crack got bigger and bigger. About half an hour later the crack turned into a hole, Water flooding the dome she thanked herself she knew how to swim. The water is now half way up the dome, she went under water and saw that there way a…oxygen tank, and flippers. She swam up and gasped for air, they water has filled the dome leaving 5 feet of air left. She swam down as fast as she could and attached the oxygen tank to her mouth, and whammed on the flippers. The dome is destroyed and she is in the sea. She looks up and realizes the surface is about 25 feet up. She rapidly swam up to the surface. Thankfully she saw a small island about 50 meters south. She was scared as she let go of the oxygen tank, it was slowing her down. After letting go of the tank she back stroked to the the island, she was about half way there but suddenly she felt something grab her back….

    • Alexa says:

      She was in shock. She has never swam before. She tried to take a breath but she could only swallow water no air. She started to kick her feet in panic. Tori was losing air. Suddenly she attempted to take one last breath in but instead of drowning she was floating. She was out of breath. She was staring up at the clouds when something scaly brushed up against her leg. Tori quickly swam as fast as she could out of the water and onto the beach. She examined the deep sea and saw a colossal monster swimming around in a circle. She closed her eyes and rubbed them. When she opened them she still saw the beast. Tori heard something coming from behind her it was the cops the orphanage must have called them. She thought that they would never find her. She searched the beach for some were to hide but the water was the only place that could hide her. Tori ran toward the water and swam till her feet could no longer touch. She forgot that she could not swim. She was about to drown. She was so tired of kicking. She toke one more breath when….

    • Kiira says:

      Tori soon started to panic! She knew that something bad was about to happen and fast. Frantically as she tried to get someone’s attention she soon noticed that she was already under water. Tori was going down fast and hard. She tried everything she could to escape the grasp of the unknown creature. Suddenly she noticed that something different had happened she no longer was going down anymore, instead she was going up. Tori was able to see the surface! She didn’t know what had happened but she knew that she needed to hurry and make her way up to the surface before it was to late. Looking up through the water she realized the breaking of dawn was almost there. As Tori broke through the water, gasping for air she knew everything was going to be okay. She could feel her toes touch the soft clay bottom, she felt the rays of sun on her face. Tori ran up to shore but suddenly something went wrong!

    • Asia says:

      A few hours later she awoke in a cage under the water. “I must’ve went unconscious earlier..” she told herself. “But wait.. theres still water in this cage.. how can I breathe under here? And what brought me here and why? What is going on?!” wondered Tori as more questions and thoughts entered her mind. She couldn’t stop thinking about more and more questions and thoughts. “I need to calm down..” she thought. It was very hard for her to remain calm, as this was all very strange. Once calm, she looked around and tried to find a way to escape. A few minutes passed and she heard footsteps. “Are footsteps even possible to hear underwater? Wait.. is this seriously the thing that I find weird about all of this?..” Tori kept thinking until she was awakened from her wonders because of a loud snarl. She popped her head up and saw something completely and utterly terrifying. But luckily it was just her mind playing tricks on her. She blinked and the monster she imagined was gone, but there was another creature there. It didn’t seem like a violent one though, it actually seemed friendly. “I remember reading a book about these creatures once, what are they called again?” Tori thought. Then realization hit her. “Oh yeah! It’s a water nymph!” she realized. Water nymphs are kind of like fairies, but underwater fairies. Except don’t be fooled by their cute appearance, they could trick you very easily. “What do you want?” said Tori to the nymph, but in a quiet, almost not audible voice. The nymph heard her though, and explained everything. Just then they both heard ferocious stomping, the nymph panicked and ran, leaving Tori behind. She screamed with terror in her eyes. The only thing in her mind were the thoughts “Am I going to die?” but then something very strange happened.

    • Madison says:

      She look done and saw a creature covered in blood it opened it’s enormous jaws and spoke in a eerie voice,”I devour little children who think that they can escape from where they are go back or parish here!”Tori shock her head in disagreement.The beast growled with anger and said,”Fine then parish!”Then Tori yelled,”STOP! I’ll go back just please don’t eat.”The creature drop her on the ground and said,”Fine but if you try to escape from there again,no matter how far you run,no matter where you hide i will fined you!”Tori nodded the creature sack back in the water.Then Tori ran to the orphanenig and said with tears in her eyes,”Please take me back Sister Kate,please.”Sister Kate agreed and took her inside and made her a delicious breakfast.1 year later Tori was adopted and she lived happily ever after.The End

  25. mackenzie says:

    Someone Else’s House

    One night,she looked out the window and saw the neighbour swimming in her pool. When she got outside to tell them that he was not someone she new. Then when she got to them she said “you shouldn’t be here” he said what are you doing on my lawn. Briana was surprised then she looked into the house, and this was not her house! Then she ran off the mans yard and went back to her house embarrassed as could be. Then she looked out the window and saw that the mans pool, was no longer there and that he was in her back yard now. What could she do but go to bed. When Brianna woke up he was standing there looking at her. She screamed the man backed up and asked her why she was there, she said it was her room then the man said….

    • Kiira says:

      No, this is my room. Briana had no clue what was happening. She had thought she was in her own room when she had fallen asleep but her memory was a little hazy. Briana was confused, and she didn’t know how to act. The man was still standing there starring directly at her. Searching around the room Briana realized she wasn’t in her own bedroom! As she looked back where the man was standing he was gone, as if he had vanished like his pool had. Briana soon began to scream. She was frightened, she didn’t know what he was going to say or do. Briana closed her eyes awhile to see if she was dreaming. Briana opened them in an instant! She had felt someone touch her face. She saw the man standing right next to her! frantically as she tried to escape she soon realized she was strapped in. The man got closer and closer, Speaking it’s going to be okay. You wont feel a thing. He put a mask on Briana. Every thing started going all fuzzy and dark. Briana’s mind went blank! She was out!

  26. Gabrielle B. :) says:

    All of a sudden he was trapped! The mysterious man had finally caught Brad in a corner down a back ally. Brad muttered to him self, “What do I do?” He quickly ducked under his arm and whizzed past him running to the end of the ally. There was a surprise waiting there for him, the police. “You’re under arrest.” One of the cops spoke sternly. Brad complained, “For what, what did I do, I would never hurt anyone!” “We never asked if you hurt anyone.” “And that guy back there should be in jail!” “It looks like your both going down to the station.”
    3 months later? Brad admitted to murder. He got sentenced to life in prison. Brad had 2 children and a wife. He seemed like a nice guy but really? What happened to him in prison? What kind of guy was he really?

    • Gabrielle B. :) says:

      reply to my stories on this one. 🙂

      • tj olaney says:

        two years. Brad woke up from a nap he was breathing like he just ran a marathon he jumped out of bed and wispered,”Oh its bad” hes room mate said,” whats bad” Brad reaplyed,”This this is whats bad” pointing at his feet. what are you talking about i thought you always had three two’s brad said “Ya thats why it has a bandge on it smart one”that night brad did not fall a sleep. In the morning the guard hit his baton on the jail bars and spoke sternly,”Rise and shine boys”Brad and his room mate slowly crawled out of bed and said,”Morning” his room mate answered,”Good morning Brad”they walked out in to the hallway and stood in a line with all the other Inmates. the Inmates walked to the cafiteria once they arived the lunch lady said,”good morning sure what would you like for breakfist this morning…

  27. Cale says:

    The Neighbour’s

    One night, he looked out the window and saw the neighbours… They where loading suspicious cargo into the back of a cargo bed. A bright lime green cab came to pick up he cargo bed or thats what Bobby-Jones thought but then he saw another cargo bed attached to the cab and it parked out front of their house! Luckily Billy’s dad Michael was sound asleep or he would be furious! The neighbours looked up at Billy’s room window. Billy ducked down in a instant! The neighbours thought they saw him but the looked away. But they keep an eyes view of the window just in case. Billy also was cautious not to be seen. Billy wanted to know what they where putting in the cargo bed on this cold winter night. All of a sudden a car pops out of no where and a large man with a drench coat jumps out and looks around. Then he gives a signal and yells out “It’s clear Boss! Come on out!” Then another man a little bit small and a little bit more serous came out with a cane and a top hat. Billy did not understand why guys that looked like they where in the mafia?! Then the man with the drench coat exclaimed “LOOK UP THERE ITS A KID GET HIM!!!” Three pf the men that where packing large boxes into the back of the cargo bed dropped the boxes and ran to the back door! Those three men each found a way in one got in the window another shatter a window and jumped in! The last man climbed to wall into Billy’s window! By this time the two men where out side of his door and the other was climbing in the window! The men opened the door and they guy jumped in and…

    • Kiira says:

      As Billy stumbled backwards he fell to the ground. He froze in horror. Struggling to get back up on his feet he tried to process what was happening. He could hear his own heart beat echo through his small room. Billy had no clue what to do. His mother was out at a friend’s house and his father was at a work. Billy was the only child in his family. He was home alone! Billy had never been in a situation like this before and was very frightened. Suddenly he heard the loud THUMP of the man’s boots. He was in his room and he was getting closer and closer to Billy. Next thing Billy knew the other two had broken through his door and were now in his room too. Billy started to black out from fear. As Billy soon woke up he noticed he was in the back of a truck and the truck was still in motion. As he looked around to see if anybody was there he soon began to stand up silently trying not to make a sound. At first Billy was confused he couldn’t quite remember what had happened. About a minute after pondering on that thought he soon remembered all that had happened. The car came to a screeching stop! Billy fell back down and hit his head very hard. His vision started to go all fuzzy but he refused to black out. He was trying the best but it wasn’t good enough. Billy collapsed to the ground and blacked out. As Billy soon awoke he noticed the back of the truck was slowly opening. All of the sudden a man jumped in and started to drag Billy out!

  28. Alexa says:

    Alison franticly crab walked backwards trying to stand up. She wanted to scream but the words could not escaped her lips. Her dog Scruffy stopped barking and started to whimper in panic as the black image swerved toward both of them. “ Run!” commanded Alison to Scruffy. Scruffy dashed out of the forest and left Alison sitting in shock. She ordered her body to stand and run but she just sat there. The black image started to take form as it flew closer and closer. Alison could see that it had a huge head with long claws. Alison had to think quick all she wanted was to be at home with her family and Scruffy. Suddenly she wondered were Scruffy went, her house was very far away. She just hoped that the dark image did not hurt him. She grabbed a free piece of bark that bust have fallen off during a serious wind storm. The piece was about the size of her and could protect her for a few more seconds. Just when the dark figure was over top of her ready to attack a loud nose bellowed from a lit up section in the forest. She turned and saw her family and her whole neighbourhood standing with weapons and torches prepared to fight. To the right of them barked Scruffy all exited. Alison was so exited to see all of them and was so thankful that Scruffy got them for me! The dark figure spun around and flew far away. Alison was so happy, she ran to her family and friends and gave them a huge hug.

  29. tyler says:

    It was a strange night, there seemed to be a chill in the air…
    There was a particular lady that was walking to the her house. On her way home she saw a man he was a very tall skinny man with a army hat and a short beard
    that had a German jacket that man spoke very softly and he did not speak a lot and the only time he really spoke was when he was either with friends or when he was alone.
    and when she saw that man he walked right past her and he accidentally bumped in to her and she dropped her stuff and the man said i want your sole! The guy tuck her to this creepy place in a dusty place the man was running with something but she couldn’t see what it was but all sudden this thing she saw it was…

  30. derek says:

    It was a strange night, there seemed to be a chill in the air i was walking to the store in the night. I heard footsteps behind me and they were close.I slowed down and I looked back to see what it was.

  31. Sam says:

    Sam

    Prologue

    Micheal woke and saw his body covered with rain, blood was coursing though his brain and trauma whelped through his body.
    He was so tense he could hardly move, and he decided the best thing to do is breathe, let all the feelings leave his body. His eyes opened slowly and woke up in hospital. With his heartbeat being monitored and blood and oxygen bags were hung from hangars.
    He tried to sit up but every muscle in his body ached he had no choice. To wait see the world go bye before his eyes. He felt so worthless! He wished to see the sun and longed to have the ever so sweet sunshine beam on his face. 2 years later… Micheal was standing out in the sunlight and had recovered from a terrible car accident. He decided to go into military training and pay back his country for the wonders they had gave him. A couple years later was in the best-in-class division and felt great. Micheal was on a helicopter for covert military training, all of a sudden his helicopter was crashing, and monsters were killing his men! He desperately grabbed onto the pad and was hanging at least a hundred feet in the air! The helicopter was dropping fast he jumped… Micheal hit the ground and got up immediately and was greeted by a Man named Jacob, and Jessie. He drove with them into the distance.

    Chapter one: A day for fear

    Jacob needed a job. He walked about three blocks when he felt it.
    A cold chill fell below his back, and a bad haze rose above his head like a bad dream,
    an uneasy feeling eased over Jacob. With his short haircut, untrimmed beard and dirty jacket which
    made him look a bit foreign when going to a job interview. It was the only thing he had after
    moving from the countryside, he had to sell most of his things to move into a overpriced apartment.
    The city made Jacob feel strange and was new and alien to him, as he walked Jacob was nervous and
    tense he had to get this job it was his last resort. He had attempted to work at several different jobs
    such as iron working, an entrepreneur, and a road clearer. This job was at bottle depot, he had arrived.
    Jacob walked into the manager’s office and murmured a ‘’hello’’ and was brought in… When he walked out of the Manager’s office he had never been so happy he had been employed by the bottle depot!
    As he sorted bottles for the rest of the day he had been stopped. The lights went out and screaming was
    heard throughout the distance… Jacob awoke with a start, the screaming had left the dark room. But
    something had changed, although the screaming had gone there was a pounding on the door… He approached the door slowly and thought what could be on the other side of the door? He opened the door with a sharp click and saw the most horrifying thing in his life… It looked dead but walked
    it was wounded but still walked in a shambling pace. He slammed the door shut and his heart racing
    he started to run, he smashed the back door over and ran into a ragged girl with a red sweatshirt and
    blue jeans they both screamed and then realized they were each human. The girl was about sixteen
    years of age, half the age of Jacob, her brown hair was matted and dirty. They dusted themselves off
    and realized that there was no time to waste. They started to run and the monsters started to pick up their pace, their numbers ascended to at least a hundred and they were gaining on them….
    they passed a couple of blocks and Jacob screamed, ‘’Follow me!’’ the girl obeyed and followed.
    They crossed an intersection and the monsters closed in on all sides! Lucky for Jacob his apartment
    was right there. They bolted into the elevator punched in the button ‘’4’’ and their hearts stopped
    as the monsters were running into the building and the elevator doors were STILL closing! The monsters almost succeeded in prying the elevator doors open but failed. Jacob and the girl were out of
    breath. Jacob asked the girl’s name, she replied, ‘’Jessie.” They ascended the elevator and arrived at
    his apartment, Jessie slammed the door and locked it Jacob took off the wall his old hunting rifle
    and his revolver. They gathered food, water, and ammunition Jacob loaded his gun and Revolver,
    grabbed his old car keys and they dashed out the door… Jacob started to drive, he didn’t know how long
    or where to but he had to get out of the city. Jessie told Jacob that the monsters were called “Zombies.”

    Chapter 2
    A Day For Terror

    Jacob had been travelling for almost two days now and, Zombies had been tearing down the whole city. It had been a long mournful, and grim ride, watching the city road crumble into a bumpy gravel -like substance. Every day they slept normally but every time the Zombies had taken over the settlement that they stayed in. Thank god, Jacob thought, without being able to get gas they would have stopped a while ago he had brought a tool to take gas from destroyed cars. One early morning a groaning filled the car with a large grumble waking Jessie and Jacob up almost instantaneously. While looking out the window Jacob drew his hunting rifle, threw his revolver to Jessie, Jacob attempted to turn on the car, but failed. The Zombies started to shamble in on all sides! Jacob had time for one more thing, he pulled out the fuse box and hot – wired the car started and they ran over two Zombies, they
    had escaped. Not quite. A Zombie was still clinging on to the bottom of the truck and grabbed on to the windshield! Jessie was quick to react she grabbed the revolver and quickly shot the Zombie off the car and was left to rot on the side of the road. They drove for a while and then it happened. About a dozen Zombies brought down an entire military helicopter! It was on a crash course for the middle of the road and had one survivor clinging on the rail! Jacob hit the breaks the man fell! The man hit the hood of the car and stared at Jacob he was from the military! His dirty Test – Training Gilli suit and Holstered hand
    gun showed his weakness not as a peace keeper, but as a scared man. Jacob grabbed him put him in the back seat, and checked for injuries. He had several bruises a small blood wound but he was fine. The soldier was a veteran from Afghanistan and told them of a tightly secure military base, 500 Kilometres away it had plenty of food and weapons for safety. Their new goal was to make it to the military base but the Zombies had nearly tripled with time going by and it was harder and harder to move, eat, collect gas, and move on. At the 250 Kilometre mark they had found out that their military friend was named Micheal and was in the top division of military soldiers, the last of his kind. They all felt they were doing well with millions of Zombies threatening to tear them apart almost to easily. Then it happened… Zombies fell from the sky and surrounded them they hit the gas but the car was not recognizable because it was covered thoroughly with Zombies. They hit the gas with exceeding force they were so close! Jacob was driving and they only had 50 kilometres to go! The car started to wobble, and shake furiously. This was the end. Or so they thought. Jessie woke up in a soft bed and realized they had saved by the military! She got up and opened the door.. A Zombie grabbed her and the world turned black.

    The End.

  32. Damien says:

    Everyone avoided the big old mansion. It was believed to have…an old abandoned cemetery under the house and some even claim the couple that owns the place has piles and piles of treasure. In the treasure was rubies, gold, diamonds and money. There once was a boy, who was a poor boy who lived in a small town where everybody knew everybody. His name was Joe, he was a quiet boy who usually kept to himself . He lived with his mom and she was his only family member in his life. His mom got really sick and she was in the hospital. They couldn’t afford to pay for the medicine. So Joe decided to try and sneak into the mansion to get enough money to take care of him and his mom. He said when he gets the money first thing he’s going to do is pay so his mom will get better. As Joe approached the house he heard yelling inside he ran inside the bushes suddenly a woman came out and slammed the door BOOM!!! The woman walked to her car, got in and drove away Joe peaked into the window and then he walked around the house to try and find a better way in. Joe walked to the back door and he saw the door nob turning Joe quickly jumped in the garbage can. A man walked out and through a bunch of left overs and a lot of garbage, it went all over Joe. As soon as the man walked back inside Joe rushed out of the garbage can and wiped all of it off. Joe walked in the back door and then…

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