Hi Class! After Tuesday’s building block activity, hopefully you have a better idea how to be an effective communicator when speaking with your classmates. Today’s communication challenge is to explain, in writing, how to accomplish one of the following:
- tie shoe laces
- read the time on an analogue clock
- put toothpaste on a toothbrush & brush teeth
- clean dishes by hand
- sharpen a pencil manually
Consider what style of writing will yield the desired result. Is a paragraph ideal or perhaps a bulleted list – you decide.
Think, write, rethink, revise, proofread, post. Your ‘How To…’ is due November 26 (Monday).
How to wash dishes by hand:
After a long, relaxing dinner, you find yourself with the duty of ‘the dishwasher’. Either you collect all the dishes, or your family helps out and takes the dishes to you. Personally I am lucky considering there are only three people in my house hold, so I do the nice deed for the day and collect all of the dishes myself. Once everything is piled up inside,or on the side of the sink, you would grab something to wash them with.(cloth, sponge, scrub brush, ect.) Then you would add dish soap to your cleaner, after a small amout is poured on, you would get down to washing the dishes. Keep a small amout of warm water running while you take your cleaner and slowly scrub it in circular motions in and around your dish. After a few moments of scrubbing, rinse it under the warn water you left running. If there is anything left on the dish, repeat this action again. Once you have washed all the dishes, you would dry them off, unless someone else hasn’t done it already, then put them away. That’s how you wash your dishes.
Well done! I assume the meal was delicious so nothing had to be scraped off the plate?
Quick Fix: household is a compound word (not two separate words)
Well I sure hope it was…I have quite the expierience with washing dishes,even though we have I dish washer. I clean whatever doesn’t fit inside (pots/pan/strainers/ect.)
It’s great to hear you have this ‘hands on’ experience Shaleyea (pardon the pun). Perhaps a new type of dishwasher needs inventing…
How To…
Many people now how to brush there teeth but most people don’t now how to brush to take away the germs. First you wet your tooth brush turn the water off to not waste. Then you put on a finger tip of tooth paste and start to brush. Start on the bottom corner on the right and then move your way to the middle then to the left side this will insure for a clean polish. Then start at the left top corner and do the same as the bottom. Make sure to wash your tooth brush well so no germs will be left behind. Then rinse your mouth with warm water. This will insure for great squeaky clean teeth. Try this method it will work.
Which part of the toothbrush do I put the toothpaste on?
You put the tooth paste on the bristles of the brush.
Got it!
Quick Fix: ensure (to make something happen) vs insure (to protect against a loss or damage) – If you buy car insurance, this will ensure you car is repaired after an accident.
part-ten me what do u mean
The difference between insure and ensure is tricky. When thinking of insure, perhaps thinking of insurance will help. One buys insurance in case something valuable is lost, damaged, or stolen (car insurance, house insurance…).
Ensure means to make certain that something will happen – paying your airfare on time will ensure you a spot on the plane.
How to…
Many little kids don’t know how to tie their shoes but adults they must. Many don’t so this paragraph will help you if you don’t know how to do this simple task. How to tie a shoe. First you grab both laces and lap them over each other. Once you have done the first step get the right lace and fold it under the left. After pull both laces tight. Now you have a knot. You make a bunny ear with the right lace and then wrap the right lace around the bunny ear. Then you tuck the right lace in the loop under the ear and pull. That’s how you tie your shoe laces.
I’ve grabbed both laces, now my shoes are tied together…now what?
No you don’t tie the shoes together you tie you one shoe not both at the same time.
So one must grab both ends of one lace…
.Put the pencil in the sharpener.
.Make sure that the pencil is in it tightly and it does not fall out.
.Then grab the handle and twist it.
.Then take the pencil out and write something with it
Which end goes in the sharpener? Be clear.
1. pull laces until they’re tight.
2.cross them over.
3.take left or right lace and put it through the bottom hole.
4. pull laces until they’re tight.
5.make the left lace into a hoop
6.take the right lace and wrap around the loop and put it through the small hole then pull.
Laces can be pulled in many places until they are tight…be more specific.
1. The first thing you need to do to brush your teeth properly is to have a tooth brush preferably an electric one.
2.Then you need to have tooth paste one that has the plaque control or if you have sensitive teeth you should get the sensitive toothpaste.
3. You then screw of the lid or you can like pop of the lid from one side.
4. You wet your tooth brush under worm water.
5.Then you put down your tooth brush on the counter.
6.You hold your tooth brush on the counter with one hand.
7.Then you take your toothpaste and put it on your tooth brush
8.You take your tooth brush and you put it in your mouth.
9. Once its in your mouth you put it on your right back molar.
10.Then you turn your tooth brush on.
11.Then you move it around on each tooth in a circular motion.
12.After you do your bottom teeth you do your top teeth.
13.Make sure you get at your gum line so their is no plaque left.
14.Then you should brush your tung because bacteria can grow on your tung.
15Now you can enjoy a fresh clean mouth.
#7 – Where on the toothbrush does the paste go?
It goes on the bristles witch are usually located at the top of the tooth brush.
Quick Fix: witch (female sorcerer) vs which (pronoun for asking for or referring to something)
tying your shoes 101
1. you grab both strings
2. make a knot
3. now make one loop with each string
4.then make a knot with the two loops
5. now hold them tight
and you’ve tied your shoes congratulations
Hmm…now my shoes are tied together because I grabbed both strings!
tying your shoes 101
1.grab a foot doesn’t matter witch one
2.grab both strings on your one foot
3.make a knot and pull
4.then make a loop with each string
5.and pull them tight
congratulations you’ve tied your shoes
4.5 Make a knot with both loops
Where is the second string…do I put two strings in one shoe? Then what do I do with you shoe without strings?
Hey Mr.Bell it’s Rylee Johnson. I was in your gr. 6-7 class last year. Highschool Rocks!!
Hi Rylee! It’s wonderful to hear from you and I am glad you are loving high school. It is an outstanding time if you are active and involved in the things high schools can offer (and if you keep organized and on top of your studies). I wish you well – Mr. Bell
How To Sharpen a Pencil
1. Put your pencil where the led is sticking out put it in the pencil sharpener.
2. Hold the pencil in one hand while it is in the pencil sharpener and turn the handle with your other hand.
3. Repeat step 2 until your pencil is sharp.
Well done Gabby – how do you know when the pencil is sharp?
When the end is pointy.
How to sharpen a pencil……
1. Get a pencil.
2. Put the led end in the sharpener. (make sure that it is in all the way)
3. Grab the handle of the sharpener and turn it 5-11 times.
4. Take it out and if it isn’t sharp enough put it in and turn the handle 3 more times.
Now you have a sharp pencil to write with.
Nicely said Jada. They do not use lead in pencils anymore because it is bad for your health. I think graphite is used.
How To Tie Your Shoe Laces! By: Drew. R. Hegyi
First you take your right shoe and loosen the lace in it. Then you tighten it one loop at a time so you get a nice tightness on your foot. Did I mention that your foot has to be in the shoe while your doing this? When your done tightening your wright shoe you take both ends of the lace and cross them over, then you take one end of the lace and put it through the part under and through the two ends. When your done this make two bunny rabbit ears and cross them over, then you take one bunny rabbit ear put it under and through the two ears along with the other ears little string. When your done do the same with the other shoe.
Well said Drew!
Quick Fix: right (not wright); when you’re done (not your)
How to brush your teeth:
1) get out your tooth brush.
2) get out your tooth paste.
3) twist off the cap on the top of the tooth paste .
4) remember to put the tooth paste on the side of the tooth brush that has the Bristle’s on it.
5) squeeze the tooth paste out of the tooth past tube on to the tooth brush.
6)an then put the tooth brush in your mouth and start to brush
Why would you consider bristles to be a proper noun?
Remember, use an apostrophe to show possession (Billy’s toy) and for a contraction (it’s).
how to tie shoes
1) take two shoes and put them each of your feet
2)then take ends on one of your shoes and wrap them around each other and pull.
3)after that make a loop with one end of the shoe
4)wrap the other end around your loop once
5) push the end through the gap in between your two ends (you should have two loops).
6)after you have completed this pull both loops tight
Thanks Jake! Would you make any changes to the steps if you were trying to teach a young child how to tie shoes?
How to Sharpen a Pencil Manually:
1) Grab a pencil and walk over to the sharpener
2) Look at the pencil and stick the NON- eraser end into the sharpener
3) Make sure to put it into the right sized hole for your pencil ( small pencil, small hole/big pencil, big hole
4) Next turn the lever on the sharpener approximately 6 times
5) Take out your pencil and see if it is sharpened
6) If it is go back to your paper and start writing, if it isn’t do step 4 again
7) Continue steps 4-5 until your pencil is sharpened
8) After your pencil is ready go sit down and start writing!!
Clearly and concisely stated – well done Jillian!
1. You put the none eraser part in the sharpener.
2. then you grab the handle and spin it till its sharpened
Simply stated Jacob! How do you know when it is sharp?
Quick Fix: ‘non’ (not none); it is = it’s; until (not till)
How to sharpen a pencil manually, by Spencer.
First you have to get a pencil that needs to be sharpened, find a pencil sharpener that requires you to sharpen the pencil manually. Then you insert the pencil into the sharpener. On the side of the sharpener there should be a handle on the side that turns, grab that and firmly hold the pencil and turn the handle. While turning the handle stop every couple seconds to see if your pencil is sharpened. after like 10 seconds your pencil should be sharpened.
Hmm, my eraser is sharp, now what?
how to put toothpaste on toothbrush and brush your teeth: in the morning or the night you have to brush your teeth so you crab your tooth brush and crab the toothpaste and make sure that. The brushes are facing up and put the toothpaste on the toothbrush and put the toothbrush in your mouth and start brush.
Well said Kobe!
Quick Fix: grab (not crab)
Put soap on the dish and scrub with hot water and sponge and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and scrub and then wash the soap off and dry it and put it away.
What is another way to imply repetition without writing ‘and scrub’ numerous times? More detail is required in your description. Read the posts of your classmates to see the ideas and the writing skills, then repost your improved list.
How to clean a dish…by hand
Start by filling a sink with hot soapy water .
Next get a CLEAN cloth and slowly over and over
then put the dish in the other side of the sink
And put water all over the plates then dry the plates off and you did it.
Take a moment to proofread (out loud). Are there any lines to fix so that they make more sense?