First Post of the School Year

Hi Class!

Imagine you could travel to one place in the world and take one person with you. Where would you go and who would you take? Support your choices with several reasons. Your response should be at least 4 sentences in length.


  • be sure to answer ‘WHY’ in your post (why did you choose that particular place, and that person)
  • skilled writers do not repeat the same sentence pattern (avoid starting all of your sentences with ‘I would…”
  • interesting words make for interesting reading
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66 Responses to First Post of the School Year

  1. Jordan Elfstrom says:

    I would bring Megan fox. I would bring her because she is beautiful. We would go to Hawaii. We would go to Hawaii because it is a very nice place on the beach and hotels with pools to go swimming in.

  2. Rylee says:

    I would go to Paris because I have always wanted to go there from when I was little to now. If I could bring anyone I would choose my uncle Chad. I would bring him because he loves to travel and he is great at photography. It would be a beautiful place to go. I hope I get to go there with him someday!

  3. Keira says:

    I would go to Japan. I’d go they because they are still troubled from the tsunami that happend their! I would take my bestie Morgan from New Zeland to Japan with me. I would take her because we both like to help people in need. It would be an amzing expierience to be in πŸ™‚

  4. I want do bring Nicolas Cage to some where hot because I like hot places. Another reason is Nicolas Cage is in a lot of good movies, for example Ghost Rider it was a big hit, Knowing was a big hit to, also Face Of with John Travlota.

  5. conner says:

    I would take Jake from Mrs.Scots class to…LEGO LAND!because me and Jake love LEGO.Iv always wanted to go there.And LEGO is the best.

  6. isaac :) says:

    I would bring the ke$ha because i would love to meet and get to know her and see what kind of person she is . And the place i would like to go to is Jamaica because its hot and theres lots of surfing and good food and beautiful water and tons of fish .

    • Mr. Bell says:

      What kind of person do you think she is?

      Quick Fixes:
      – I is always a capital letter.
      – there is = there’s

  7. Anna says:

    My choice of destination would be Venice.
    I choses Venice because I think it would be cool to get a boat ride to school rather then a car.
    I would take my best friend Taylor hepper.
    Why? Because we hang out a lot and I can tell her anything and show her anything.

  8. amy says:

    I want to go to Hawaii. i would like bring friend Lilah, Because so i can go swimming with the dolphins and fish! i love swimming its so fun!!

  9. melissa says:

    I would like to go to the Bahamas with Emilee!:)
    we would have so much fun together.
    we would lay on the beach.
    then we would go shopping for gifts for back home.
    the Bahamas is the place to go when your grounded.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Quick Fix:
      – All sentences must begin with a capital letter.
      – you are = you’re (you’re grounded)

  10. shae :) says:

    If i was to bring one person to one place in the hole world I bring josh Caron. Because he is a hockey player that just got drafted to the NHL from Minnesota wild and ever since i stared playing hockey iv looked up to him. I think i would have to bring him to the winter olympic games for a hockey game.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Quick Fixes:
      – I is always a capital letter in any part of the sentence
      – I have = I’ve
      – Josh is a proper noun and requires a capital letter

  11. Mariah says:

    I want to go to New York. I would like to bring Roisin. We would have so much fun. We would also go shopping!

  12. josh.B says:

    My choice would be to go to Australia. My choice is this because I would like to go scuba diving along the Great Barrier Reef. I would take my Dad with me on my trip. I would take him because he was a marine biologist and he could tell me about the fish and the coral. It would be lots of fun because we also go to rain forest to see all the wild animals. I hope i get to go to Australia.

  13. keenan says:

    My choice to go anywhere I want would be Rio in Brazil. Cause of all the pretty birds. I would bring my Brother on the trip with me. I think I would choose him to see the birds to.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Quick Fixes:
      – cause is the reason something happened (The earthquake caused the destruction.); use because
      – use too when you mean as well or also (…see the birds too.)

  14. josh.B says:

    good idea jordan

  15. Emilee says:

    I would like to go to the Bahamas with Melissa! πŸ™‚
    I would bring Melissa Bahamas because she is a good friend. πŸ™‚
    We would lay on th beach,
    Then go shopping for gifts for us,friends and family.
    After we would ride dolphins!

  16. Rem Murray says:

    If I could go anywhere in the world I would go to Sun Peaks Resort in British Columbia .I would go to Sun Peaks Resort because it is fantastic and I could ski all day.
    If I could bring one person with me I would my big brother Tristan. The reason I would bring Tristan is because he is a awesome skier. That is I have to say about that

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Nicely written! Quick Fix:
      – use an before words beginning with vowels (…he is an awesome skier)

  17. Ashley says:

    My favorite place to travel would be Rome, Italy. My choice would be there because I have always wanted to see the Trevi Fountain. I would choose to bring my Grandma. My choice would be to bring my grandma because we are very close and I could never choose between my Mom and Dad.

  18. Kolton :) says:

    I would bring Ke$ha to Italy. So we could eat pizza in the rain. then after pizza we would go in shark infected water and catch sharks. then I would send her home in a taxi. πŸ˜€

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Quick Fixes:
      – begin sentences with capital letters (After pizza… Then I would…)
      – use infested rather than infected (shark infested waters = full of sharks)

  19. Jonny :) says:

    If I could bring one person it would be Craig Mcloud. I would go to kamloops to wake board with Craig . we would go up and down the river all day wake boarding. We would have soo much fun. πŸ˜€

  20. Braeden or BQ says:

    I would go to Denmark’s caves with my dad.I would bring my dad because he is good at bargaining,camping and exploring.The reason why I wont to go to the caves in Denmark is that they are suspicioned to be haunted,a portal to another dimension and filled with the unknown. I also would go to Denmark because they have cool souvenirs and funny accents.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Very interesting. Quick Fixes:
      – leave a space after punctuation
      – remember the apostrophe in won’t

  21. justin says:

    hhhmmmmmm I Really would go to … Mexico ! So I might bring my dog Bubba because
    he’s my best friend and he’s funny. And why I would go to Mexico is because it’s a nice
    place . So I could jet ski in the sun set , eat Mexican food , travel around , and party even though I’m not parting type of person.

  22. Ruchita says:

    Since I never went to China I would go to China but I would only go there in a holiday because it’s super cool when there celebrating something!. I think I might take my brother to China because I he might loves Chinese food. While I am in China I think I would go to the mall first and I think I might buy something cool and weird. If i had to eat something i would eat noodles and a fortune cookie and thats how I would like to do inc China with my brother.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Quick Fixes:
      – they are = they’re (…when they’re celebrating something)
      – I is always a capital letter (…I would eat noodles…)

  23. joel says:

    I would go to Rome, my friends Quinn and Emerson would be the ideal people I would invite. Well they are both my best friends and I would like them to experience the joy of the past and the history inside the ruins. Rome is place were many come for romantic purposes and others for science. I think Rome would be one of the places I would like to go.

  24. Kyle says:

    If I could go anywhere in the world I would go to America.

  25. josh says:

    If I went to to one place in the world with one person I would go with bill gates to mexico
    because he is the richest person in the world and he has a resort in mexico.
    Another reason is because he could buy every thing I want.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Quick Fixes:
      – proper nouns require capital letters (Bill Gates, Mexico)
      – remember to include punctuation to end sentences (….go with Bill Gates to Mexico. He is the richest…)

  26. Joseph1235678940 says:

    I would go to Italy because the name of it just think of it and I’ve heard lots of interesting thing about the place like the culture and the people. I would bring my friend Brennen and the resin for that is that is that both Italian and I’ve known him for such a long time it would be fun to hangout with him.

    • Mr. Bell says:

      Hi Rem – Please take the time to add more than a salutation. Feel free to contribute to your post or the posts of your peers. We would enjoy hearing what you have to say beyond ‘hi’.

  27. My choice would be the Bahamas,and I would bring……..Ke$ha because she is cool and I want to meet her and get to know her!!

  28. Britt says:

    I would go to Alaska with Kimberly Nicole Loucks.
    Because we could go Dog Sledding,And Eat lots of snow
    I would get to go skiing and Kimberly Nicole Loucks Would watch me!
    It would be sooo fun and be life changing experience Of Me,Brittney Watters And My Best friend Kimberly Nicole Loucks. <3

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