Hi Class! What is your most favourite candy? Explain your answer using a vivid and descriptive vocabulary. An outstanding response should leave readers’ mouths watering.
reeses penut buter cups are the best candys in the whole wide world. I choose this because they are tasty, I mean like chocolate and penut butter it is to die for. yumm
– capital letters to start sentences
– use the spell check (if you see a wavy, red line under a word, right-click on it to see the suggestions)
I have got to say my favourite candy is probably Hershey cookies and cream bar. I like them the most because I adore cookies and when cookies are combined with cream into a candy bar, it is just amazing! with all the creamy,tasty,creaminess. That is my favourite candy bar.
Good response! Be aware of the phrase ‘with all the creamy,tasty,creaminess’ as it is not a sentence by itself.
Kyle………. INCREDIBLE choice.
Thank you Josh! 🙂
ya i forgot about that 🙁
I like carimilk it has a smooth caramel and a deep mouth watering milk chocolate.
Is Caramilk a proper noun?
My favourite candy is 3 Musketeers because of its savoury filling I find it the most delectable.
Excellent adjectives – well done!
Reeces peanut butter cups are the best candy in the world. They are truly the most delicouse food in canada mexico is a whole different story !!!…
Canada,Mexico quick fix :p
My favourite type of candy is skittles because they’re really good. I like them because there is alot of them and they come in different kinds that are really good except for they yellow that one is bad.
Skittles is a brand name, thus a proper noun.
My favourite candy has got to be pop rocks. Pop rocks is like just tiny rocks in the package but as soon as you throw them in your mouth it pops out of control. haha. It feels so cool. The best part is when you put the whole package in your mouth!!! pop rocks!!!
Is Pop Rocks the name of the candy (therefore a proper noun)?
My favourite candy is sour worms and worms and toads .
My favorite candy is Coffee Crisp.It’s so tasty I just want it all in my mouth. the delicious coffee taste melting in my mouth,so tasty,oh so good,oh snap in my mouth.these are just some of the examples of the wonder full taste of Coffee Crisp
Good description. The term ‘snap’ is not used in academic writing unless you are referring to snapping your fingers, the sound of a snap, the snap on clothing…
i like lolly pops
– I is always a capital letter.
My favourite candy is Hershey chocolate bar!
Too bad they don’t have Hershey chocolate bar in canada.
When I went to the U.S I got lots of big hershey chocolate bars!!! 🙂
my favourite candy is chocalte because it is soo creamy and sooo yummy!!!!!!!!
Use the spell checker while working…chocalte (chocolate) should show up with a wavy, red line under it while you are typing. If your spell checker is not on, let me know.
I love this class.
Who doesn’t Connor who doesn’t.
reices peanut butter cups
my favourite candy is… laughie taffy, coffee crisp, kit kat, hershey chocolate bars,areo bars
I love crunchy bars they are taste an an crunchy on the inside an has a light glaze of chocolate to make a perfect blend of chocolate and delicious crunchy candy .
Reread your sentence (it is a single sentence) since there is only one period. There needs to be a few pauses in all of your ideas.
the talk of candy is making me hungry
The writing must be pretty good. Remember to write in sentences.
My favourite candy is mars bars because their so chewy and you wont to saver it but you cant. The best part is the soft so soft nought it tastes so good my mouth. The caramel just melts in your mouth. It’s the best candy in the world. This is candy is like a boss and you should try it.
– Mars is a proper noun (needs a capital letter)
– They are so chewy = They’re so chewy
my favourite candy is caramilk because it has chocolate and caramilk in it!!!!!!! 🙂
I like Mentoes because of all the different kinds of ones that you can get.
And when you put them in coke, the coke blows up.
Aero because its just choclet no penuts or anything else.
I would have to say Swedish Berries because they are really sweet! I also like them because they are chewable and they taste delicious. But also Fuzzy Peaches because they are really sour and I love sourness.
I like skittles because it’s tastes really good . It is kind of fruity, but it’s also addictive .
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